Quick Question
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browngirlWhat's the better title: A Certain Star or The Star That Dartles?
(Title Character/protagonist is Kory aka Starfire.)
(Title Character/protagonist is Kory aka Starfire.)
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Date: 2006-09-20 03:50 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-09-20 03:52 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-09-20 04:00 pm (UTC)My Star"*, go with "The Star That Dartles" -- otherwise, I think you might confuse people with a term that's not in common usage. "A Certain Star" works nicely and can be a touchstone for the character as well as for a locale or situation.
*Just to avoid people needing to ask, here's the poem:
My Star by Robert Browning
All, that I know
Of a certain star
Is, it can throw
(Like the angled spar)
Now a dart of red,
Now a dart of blue
Till my friends have said
They would fain see, too,
My star that dartles the red and the blue!
Then it stops like a bird; like a flower, hangs furled:
They must solace themselves with the Saturn above it.
What matter to me if their star is a world?
Mine has opened its soul to me; therefore I love it.
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Date: 2006-09-21 03:52 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-09-20 05:24 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-09-20 08:02 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-09-20 09:33 pm (UTC)Also, Koryfic yay!
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Date: 2006-09-20 11:07 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-09-21 12:29 am (UTC)You should call it A Story About Kory Because She Is Awesome!I prefer 'Dartles', but now