If you're specifically going to the reference to Robert Browning's My Star"*, go with "The Star That Dartles" -- otherwise, I think you might confuse people with a term that's not in common usage. "A Certain Star" works nicely and can be a touchstone for the character as well as for a locale or situation.
*Just to avoid people needing to ask, here's the poem:
My Star by Robert Browning
All, that I know Of a certain star Is, it can throw (Like the angled spar) Now a dart of red, Now a dart of blue Till my friends have said They would fain see, too, My star that dartles the red and the blue! Then it stops like a bird; like a flower, hangs furled: They must solace themselves with the Saturn above it. What matter to me if their star is a world? Mine has opened its soul to me; therefore I love it.
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My Star"*, go with "The Star That Dartles" -- otherwise, I think you might confuse people with a term that's not in common usage. "A Certain Star" works nicely and can be a touchstone for the character as well as for a locale or situation.
*Just to avoid people needing to ask, here's the poem:
My Star by Robert Browning
All, that I know
Of a certain star
Is, it can throw
(Like the angled spar)
Now a dart of red,
Now a dart of blue
Till my friends have said
They would fain see, too,
My star that dartles the red and the blue!
Then it stops like a bird; like a flower, hangs furled:
They must solace themselves with the Saturn above it.
What matter to me if their star is a world?
Mine has opened its soul to me; therefore I love it.
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Also, Koryfic yay!
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You should call it A Story About Kory Because She Is Awesome!I prefer 'Dartles', but now