browngirl

I was going to stay up till midnight so this would be posted tomorrow, but I'm groggy. Anyway, this is going around, and I thought, why not?

Pick a passage from my stories, up to 500 words, from anything I've written in this journal, and comment to this post with that selection (including a link to the story being excerpted). I will then give you a DVD commentary on that snippet: what I was thinking when I wrote it, why I wrote it in the first place, what's going on in the character's heads, why I chose certain words, what this moment means in the context of the rest of the story, awful puns [perhaps], and anything else that you'd expect to find on a DVD commentary track.

Like Petra over at Dreamwidth I reserve the right to lie egregiously about anything over 3 years old. My stories are listed by character (and sometimes topic) here: http://rubynye.livejournal.com/tag/

Title: The Bargain
Fandom: Numb3rs
Rating: NC-17 with warnings.
Pairing: [Ian] Edgerton/Don Eppes/Charlie Eppes
Summary: "What will you give me," says Edgerton, "not to shoot your brother?"
Warnings/Spoilers: AU. Non-consensual. Incest, violence, no spoilers.
Acknowledgements: lomedet for wisdom and handholding; emmademarais for the prompt and boundless encouragement.
Author's Note: In first comment.
Disclaimer: None of these characters or their settings belong to me.
( He wishes he were the one unconscious. )