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Title: The One Concerning Simplicity
Fandom: Star Trek XI
Rating: NC-17 with warnings.
Pairing: Captain Kirk/Leah McCoy
Summary: "Now that was simple, wasn't it?"
Content Advisory: Dubious consent, explicit sex, genderswap, Mirrorverse.
Acknowledgements: Written for [livejournal.com profile] weepingnaiad: "M!Kirk/M!Leah with the prompt 'simple'."
Disclaimer: None of these characters or their settings belong to me (though I've made a few modifications).



"C'mon, Bones," he whispers over her temple, breath puffing like the pressure of a hypo, two fingers twisting and plunging inside her and hot tears burning tracks down her face. "C'mon, one more time," as his thumb rubs a steady flicker over her clit, on and off and on and off and she digs her blunt nails into his shoulders but even her head thrashes in his tempo. "C'mon, come for me," low and insistent into her ear as his fingers burn inside her and her nerves burn under her skin and she tries again to order him off her and all that comes from her mouth is a hitching whimper.

And he just laughs, and pushes harder, speeding up, and her back bows up off the bed, her head drives back into the pillow and her breasts crush into his chest, as his knuckles bruise pleasure into her. She told him she was done two orgasms ago and she knows she's done, so sore she's throbbing, but he's determined, he won't let up, she presses her face into his shoulder as she sobs, she kicks her heel into his thigh and he just grinds his hips down in a little swivel, nudging her thighs that much wider, tugging that much tighter on her hair as he fingers her even harder and his teeth press smooth-hard-bright against her skin. "One more, Bones," he rumbles, hard against the crease of her hip, shudders propagating from his chest into hers, and he won't stop even when she tries to close her trembling fingers into a fist.

All she manages is clutching his hard-muscled shoulder that much tighter. All she manages is tilting her hips into his relentless thrusts, into the searing sensation washing down her nerves under his hand. She can't again, she doesn't want this, she wants not to want him, she wants... lights erupt behind her eyes and her body clenches and spasms into coming, her lungs seize and hitch and she sobs aloud, shuddering, shattering, collapsing.

"That's it," he mutters, kissing her forehead, her squeezed-shut eyes, the tear-tracks scalded down her cheeks. "That's my girl," he murmurs over her throat, teeth like blades at her pulse as she sobs and sobs and can't fucking stop, as his broad hands pull back and push her knees up and he slides into her in one thick hard thrust. "So gorgeous," he pants as he fucks her and she clutches him helplessly and cries and cries, deep sobs bouncing off her diaphragm as he plunges into her faster and faster. "My girl, my beauty, my fucking gorgeous girl," as he slides his hand up her side and thumbs her nipple and she twitches and arches and buzzes with overstimulation, as he slides it damp and sticky up her throat and she tries to thrash her head but he winds his fingers into her hair and holds her still and makes her take it. "Mine, mine, mine," he hisses in her ear with each thrust until his voice breaks high and he starts to come and he's so heavy on her, in her, she can't breathe, all she can hear and taste and feel is him.

"Fuck," he puffs, sooner than he should be able to, and she wants to curse and she's still crying. He licks her cheek, kisses beside her eye, drinks down her tears; she rips a hand away from his shoulder to wipe her face, to cover it as she turns her head until her hair twinges in his grip, until he nuzzles her hand aside to bite her lip lightly and push his tongue into her gasping mouth. She's still shaking, she feels like she's falling, she knows she's clutching him with the dregs of her strength, she can't tell herself she doesn't shape her lips to his and kiss him back.

When he eases off this time she finally says, "God fucking dammit," and breathes as deeply as she can with him still atop her, solid and muscular and impossible to dislodge. And that bastard Kirk just chuckles against her ear, so warmly she has to clench her eyes shut to keep herself from turning her head to see his sleepy blue eyes and sated, sunny smile.

"There we go, Bones," Kirk murmurs, lifting his other hand to bracket Leah's face between his long strong inescapeable fingers, "now that was simple, wasn't it?"

Date: 2010-12-08 05:24 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] thnidu.livejournal.com
No.... commment..... ... ....

Date: 2010-12-09 06:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
I think you comment on whatever will cause me to blush the most brightly.

Date: 2010-12-08 05:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] saekhwa.livejournal.com
Just. All I have is wow.

Date: 2010-12-09 06:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*curtseys* Thank you. :)

Date: 2010-12-08 06:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_samalander/
God, I hate to say "I love this 'verse" because I worry about the kind of person it makes me, but GUH. I LOVE THIS VERSE.

I love Leah, poor Leah, and how she just can't ~not~ react to Kirk. (for Kirk?) And I love Kirk needing so much from her, and taking it no matter what.

Ugh. I love how broken it all is and how twisted and how beautiful you make it. Just lovely, in all the best and worst ways.

Date: 2010-12-09 03:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] echoinautumn.livejournal.com
This pretty much sums up all the flailing I've tried to do for the last few months about this 'verse ;________;

THIS.

Date: 2010-12-09 07:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
BWEE. :)

Date: 2010-12-09 07:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Hey, I write this 'verse, what does that make me? *grins at you* There's... all these ways people get tangled up in each other that I find irresistable to write about, via porn. It delights me that this dark little tale of mine delights you. :D

Date: 2010-12-08 07:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] weepingnaiad.livejournal.com
That is so, so perfect!

God. Just them in a nutshell. Kirk demands, pushes, pulls, drags Leah there and she can't help herself, can't do anything but exactly what he wants of her, even when it just doesn't seem at all possible for her to give anymore, he wrings it out of her.

I know I shouldn't love him like I do, but I'm kind of like Leah in that I can't resist him. You've made him quite the example of Mirror!Verse Kirk for me.

Gorgeous and thank you!
*hugs*
WN

&hearts

Date: 2010-12-09 07:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*hugs you tightly* Like I said, I wanted to do as well as I could, because you are always so good to me.

And, oh, one of the things I cannot resist about the Kirk/McCoy dynamic is how McCoy can't resist Kirk, no matter how he may try to deny it. Inverting that for Mirrorverse is dark and wicked and really indecent amounts of fun, and I really love writing Leah McCoy.

Date: 2010-12-08 10:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magickalmolly.livejournal.com
First tentacles, and now this! *reads through fingers*

Unnh, this made my belly twist, but it's so so good.

Date: 2010-12-09 07:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*uses tentacle icon*

Bwee, thank you for daring all these dodginesses for me. :)

Date: 2010-12-09 12:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sail-aweigh.livejournal.com
Geez-o-pete, but you make it hurt so damn good. I know damn well I shouldn't like this Kirk, but all I can think when Leah's crying after her orgasm is that I want one of him. I think it's because you can't be indifferent to him and he makes her feel so many things. To feel that intensely, well, I think it's a bit of a gift. So, I will reluctantly adore him and wish to be her.

Date: 2010-12-09 07:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
I think it's because you can't be indifferent to him and he makes her feel so many things.

The nice thing about stories, as [livejournal.com profile] flwrpwr_vampyre points out downthread, is that one can experience things without having to experience them. There's a thrill to terror, which is why I write these stories, but I certainly prefer it in fiction! *beams at you* I'm really glad you like this, and grateful you told me. :)

Date: 2010-12-09 03:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] echoinautumn.livejournal.com
[livejournal.com profile] _samalander said it so well, but goodness I love them, and how tangled up they are and how awful it is, but how he needs her and woajdiwjidojawoijw I am totally without words, unsurprisingly.
Edited Date: 2010-12-09 03:42 am (UTC)

Date: 2010-12-09 07:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Eee, your comments on my Mirrorverse stories just make me *dance*. Thank you so much, now and ever. *beams*

Date: 2010-12-09 06:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] diane-kepler.livejournal.com
Sohhh good and hot and unf. I flail at thee, madam, I flail.

Date: 2010-12-09 07:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
And I delight in your splendid flailing! *beams*

Date: 2010-12-09 06:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] savoytruffle.livejournal.com
Man, that was so freaking hot... with a little side of dirty-wrongness.

Date: 2010-12-09 07:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*curtseys* Thank you for telling me I managed what I intended. :D
Edited Date: 2010-12-09 07:33 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-12-09 01:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blcwriter.livejournal.com
I know how you find writing this 'verse so I don't want to say never stop writing it-- but. God. Perfect in all of its horrible ways.

Date: 2010-12-09 07:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Well, I do also keep writing it; it's a good place to find frameworks for dark ideas. And I am so glad you like this and get what I'm doing.

Date: 2010-12-09 06:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] flwrpwr-vampyre.livejournal.com
Nth'ing all the comments about how much love I have for this 'verse. It's so fucked up, Kirk raping her with pleasure and you're so glad you're not her but at the same time, it's very sexy.

That's the great thing about writing this stuff, you get to enjoy something you would never want to happen.

Date: 2010-12-09 07:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Thank you. :D I have doubly blushed, both at the compliment and because I totally deserve for poor Leah to sock me after everything I have written Kirk as putting her through. And I cited you in my reply above. :)

Date: 2010-12-09 07:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] flwrpwr-vampyre.livejournal.com
Oh wow. Now I'm blushing.

Date: 2010-12-10 03:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spikeface.livejournal.com
Poor Leah. I wonder if anything in her world is ever simple.

Date: 2010-12-10 07:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
It's unlikely, yeah.

Date: 2010-12-10 03:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fuzzyinthehead.livejournal.com
This is gorgeous and wonderful. She seems so shattered by him, and he is just gleefully dancing in the shards. It's a beautifully twisted picture. Thank you.

Date: 2010-12-10 07:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
'gleefully dancing in the shards' is a great way of putting it. You're welcome, and thank you!

Date: 2010-12-13 09:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ndia-ink.livejournal.com
*pant-pant, glurgh*
Fantasmagical smut.

Date: 2010-12-16 05:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*blushes a lot* Thank you, very much. :)

Date: 2011-01-15 01:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stormatdusk.livejournal.com
uhhh, waitress? i'll have what she's having...

Date: 2011-01-17 06:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*giggles* One evil, hot, compelling boyfriend coming right up!

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