browngirl: (Enterprise)
[personal profile] browngirl
Apparently I can write anything as long as it's not what I intended to be writing. There's a calvacade of tentacle-fic upcoming, and as for this it was written in a friendslocked post. I finally wrote Kirk/Spock Prime, and I think this is about everything I have to say on this pairing.

This is Jim's NSFW tattoo. I suppose I should tell the artists I spontaneously wrote a story about their artwork. Anyway.



After about a seven-count, Jim levers his face up out of the pillow, plants his elbows beneath himself, and starts over to ten. When nothing keeps on happening except for some rather shallow, shocked-sounding breathing, he cranes his neck to look over his shoulder and inquires, "You stroking out back there, old man?"

"No, Jim," says Spock-the-less-grumpy-elder, as Jim privately likes to think of him, his long Vulcan hands framing Jim's ass as he peers down at it like he's going to say 'fascinating' any second now. Jim kind of likes being stared at -- he works hard to make sure his ass, and the rest of him, are worth looking at -- but until a few moments ago there was all sorts of being stripped of clothes and pushed flat into the pillows and being kissed a lot going on, and he liked that a bit more. So he hums inquisitively, and clenches his glutes, and Spock-the-elder sets one dry warm forefinger on Jim's right buttcheek and says, "I am unfamiliar with this adornment."

Which one is that one -- right. Jim can see enough of the rounded orange cockhead to remember the winged phallus he got tattooed there. He wasn't even drunk, either, though now he can't remember why he thought it was a good idea.

Whatever, it's still a conversation piece, even if the conversation is about how he's not this Spock's original Jim. "I couldn't tell you," Jim says, shrugging, about to theorize on the possible body art of a version of him he'll never meet, trying to swallow that smidge of resentment at the everpresent comparison.

Spock cuts him off anyway. "Nor do you need to," he says, and his voice holds an ocean of warmth. "It is greatly aesthetic and suited to your personality."

Jim starts laughing at that, until Spock kisses him right on the tattoo, and up the small of his back and further, warm presses up the length of his spine until he finds himself moaning as if he's forgotten how to talk.

Date: 2010-07-05 01:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lomedet.livejournal.com
*is greatly amused*

also, 'his voice holds an ocean of warmth' is a nifty turn of phrase.

Date: 2010-07-06 03:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*beams* Thank you, brighteyes. I'm kind of pleased with this one, random little thing as it is.

Date: 2010-07-05 01:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] syredronning.livejournal.com
This is... funny and strange *G* Especially for this usually so tragic/dramatic pairing.

He wasn't even drunk, either, though now he can't remember why he thought it was a good idea.

Very believable *G*

Date: 2010-07-06 03:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Funny and strange is what I was going for! These two get enough Drama, I thought they could have a happy little moment.

Date: 2010-07-05 01:48 pm (UTC)
ext_367923: (Spock!Prime)
From: [identity profile] easilymused1956.livejournal.com
Oh, god, I adore, adore, adore SpockPrime/AOS Kirk stories. This is definitely one of the best.

If you were to write more, I would be exceedingly happy!

Thank you for the story and the use of that picture.

Renee

Date: 2010-07-06 03:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
My goodness, I'm blushing! Thank you! It's just a little thing, really.
(deleted comment)

Date: 2010-07-06 01:51 am (UTC)

Date: 2010-07-06 03:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*flap flap flap*

Date: 2010-07-05 02:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lindmere.livejournal.com
So first of all, "cavalcade of tentacle-fic" made me imagine an octapodular marching band, complete with a drum major and a flag line (imagine how much easier it would be to spin stuff!)

Second, it takes a wonderful mind like yours to put Spock Prime in a "hey, look at my winged penis tattoo" ficlet. I, like Spock Prime, approve.

Date: 2010-07-06 03:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
If I could draw I would currently be drawing that marching band. :D

And I am blushing a lot. *beams at you* I am just wackily myself, not least when full of cold meds.

Date: 2010-07-05 03:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spikeface.livejournal.com
I refuse to believe that KirkPrime did not have a penix tattooed on him somewhere. No man can be that smug without a penix, it's just not possible.

SpockPrime! ♥

Date: 2010-07-06 03:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Kirk!Prime had giant wings going down the length of his thighs. Spock!Prime was surprised this Jim's was so relatively tasteful. *grin*

Date: 2010-07-06 04:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spikeface.livejournal.com
Hahahaha! Now I want a fic where nuKirk preens to SpockPrime over how much of a badass rebel he is and SpockPrime is all, "Meh, KirkPrime did that twice with his eyes closed, one hand behind his back, while banging three aliens princesses."

Date: 2010-07-05 03:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] secretsolitaire.livejournal.com
*grins* That is some tattoo!

I like the descriptions of elder Spock as less grumpy and warm -- that's how I see him too in comparison with the new one. :-)

Date: 2010-07-06 03:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
He was so warm and sweet in the movie, I could have died. :) I've wanted to give him a moment like this with Jim, so here it finally is!

Date: 2010-07-05 03:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ninhursag.livejournal.com
Ahahahaha, oh Jimmy T. you are such a... um.

And I do love the warm, gentleness of Spock Prime. Even (especially) in this context, it is so lovely.

Date: 2010-07-06 04:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Jim defines irrepressability.

I can't recall, were you among the 'yeas' or the 'nays' for this pairing when we discussed the movie over salad and plumbing?

Date: 2010-07-05 04:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] igrockspock.livejournal.com
Hee! This was fun to wake up to! I couldn't *not* read after you showed me that picture!

I want to leave it as a drabble prompt for all possible pairings.

Date: 2010-07-06 04:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
AHAHAHA oh yes. This would be an *awesome* pan-ship drabble prompt. BWEE.

Date: 2010-07-05 04:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azephirin.livejournal.com
HEE. This pairing isn't usually my thing, but I really like the warmth and intimacy here. And I feel like a number of incidents in Jim's life could be summed up with "it seemed like a good idea at the time...."

Date: 2010-07-06 04:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*beam* Then I have done what I set out to do. And isn't Jim just the master of "it seemed like a good idea at the time"?

Date: 2010-07-05 05:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eppic.livejournal.com
This is just. afsdfa tattoos and Jim and Spock Prime, oh my god. This is glorious and it makes my life.

Date: 2010-07-06 04:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*happy dances a la my icon*

Date: 2010-07-05 07:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] monkey5s.livejournal.com
OK, I have to comment on this. First of all, if anyone ever deserved that particular piece of Ursula Vernon art tattooed on a butt cheek, it's RebootKirk. Spock-the-less-grumpy-elder is wonderful here.

But, really, how overly excited am I at the prospect of a cavalcade of tentacle-fic?? WAY TOO.

Date: 2010-07-06 04:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Bwee. I am blushing. Thank you. The tentacle fic will all be edited up from the [livejournal.com profile] issenterprise Tentacle Kink Meme, currently tentacularly flourishing!

Date: 2010-07-05 09:33 pm (UTC)
sage: Still of Natasha Romanova from Iron Man 2 (Default)
From: [personal profile] sage
This is made of so much win! <3

Date: 2010-07-06 04:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*beams* Thank you, sweetie. I always wanted to give these two a moment together.

Date: 2010-07-06 04:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*curtseys* :D

Date: 2010-07-06 01:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] weepingnaiad.livejournal.com
Honestly? This pairing is the only Kirk/Spock I read and this was great! Amusing without being overly bittersweet, which seems to be so often the case.

Lovely!

Date: 2010-07-06 04:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
I hear you -- I far prefer Kirk/Spock!Prime to Reboot Kirk/Spock myself. I'm really glad I could please you with this bonbon!

Date: 2010-07-06 01:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ariadnechan.livejournal.com
I like it is really amusing!!

Date: 2010-07-06 04:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*grin* Thank you. :)

Date: 2010-07-06 04:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] originalpuck.livejournal.com
Oh, I loved this. I love Jim's vague and uncertain even to himself insecurities, and I love the Spock!Prime loves him just the way he is. And that tattoo is a million levels of awesome, and so Jim (and I love that he wasn't drunk when he got it). Everything about this is perfect and grin-inducing. ^^

Date: 2010-07-06 04:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Eee, thank you! I love inducing grins. :D

Date: 2010-07-07 05:49 pm (UTC)
jadelennox: Senora Sabasa Garcia, by Goya (Default)
From: [personal profile] jadelennox
OMG OLD SPOCK HOT. Also hilarious what with the tattoo, but hooray.

Date: 2010-07-08 02:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Old!Spock has got it going on! *grin* I am delighted that you like this.

Profile

browngirl: (Default)
browngirl

June 2017

S M T W T F S
    12 3
45678910
11121314151617
18192021222324
252627282930 

Most Popular Tags

Style Credit

Expand Cut Tags

No cut tags
Page generated Jul. 3rd, 2025 01:34 am
Powered by Dreamwidth Studios