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Title: Hopes and Expectations
Fandom: Star Trek XI
Rating: PG with warnings.
Pairing: Chekov/Sulu, Chekov/Sulu/Sentient Plant
Summary: Hikaru introduces Pavel to a new friend.
Content Advisory: Rather tentacular, threesome-tinged slash, but not at all explicit.
All Thanks To: [livejournal.com profile] lomedet. *beams*
Disclaimer: None of these characters (except the plant) or their settings belong to me.
Title from "Starlight" by Muse, because I like the theme.
Author's Note: This started as a fill to this kink meme prompt but went far afield, ending up as a sequel to Black Holes and Revelations (rated NC-17), though you don't need to read that to understand this.


When Pavel finds Hikaru he has to stop himself from drawing his phaser. Hikaru lies sprawled in a tangle of tendrils, most thicker than his arms, all emerging from a lush green hummock. Even though Pavel usually sees Hikaru's smile from any distance, it takes him a moment to notice it now, to see through the momentary red haze that Hikaru lies pillowed on one particularly fat tendril, its green warm beside shining black hair, to hear through the thunderous rush in his ears that Hikaru croons wordlessly to the plant.

At which Pavel shakes himself, though his spine stays rigid, and barks a laugh so Hikaru will notice him and turn a bright hot red. This is not the planet of the Jellyfish people, after all, and Hikaru seems quite content, though thoughts of pollen intoxication flash through Pavel's mind, and he considers going back to ask Dr. M'Benga for a mask.

That would mean leaving Hikaru here, so Pavel does not do that. He clears his throat, and folds his arms, and watches Hikaru's eyes ease open then flare wide, watches that blush well up in Hikaru's cheeks and says, "I was worried terribly, and all the while you are canoodeling with a pile of vines."

"I'm pretty sure it's 'canoodling'," Hikaru says as if he isn't blushing, stroking the tendril his cheek lay against as he sits up. "And I -- we were talking. She was talking to me."

Pavel raises an eyebrow in the style of Commander Spock, or as close to it as he can. "I had a similar chat once with a giant jellyfish, do you remember? You needed your katana to end it."

Hikaru tenses all over, so hard his spine stiffens. "This is -- she's not --" He glances side to side at the tendrils tangled all around him, and then up with his eyebrows drawn down, and he and Pavel stare at each other for a stretching, lengthening moment. A vibration builds inside Pavel, and he does not know if it's anger or worry or both, if he feels Hikaru is betraying him, if he should or should not.

Then Hikaru glances down, and the moment breaks, the vibrations jangle against Pavel's shock and sink away under his relief. "No, I get it," Hikaru says, soft and hushed. "I can see how this looks to you, but really, look at me." His eyes are open and sane, undrugged. "I'm not hallucinating, I promise you. She's friendly."

Pavel nods. Hikaru unwinds his right hand from the tendrils, as mindfully as he might unlink arms, and when he reaches up Pavel takes hold of his hand. Pavel's body is rigid with reaction, but this is not that planet, and Hikaru vouches for this plant. So he lets Hikaru draw him near, stepping and sitting carefully as he settles amidst the tendrils.

They rustle and slide up over him, entwining him, and he fights himself as they embrace him, his own tensing limbs, his own urge to flee. Hikaru rubs the back of Pavel's hand with his thumb, broad fingers bracing his palm, and Pavel breathes and slowly relaxes.

And then the voice brushes his mind, and it is nothing like the Mathematician, nothing of that devious, complex focus. This is all sensation and emotion, curiosity and the brush of plant-skin on human skin, sympathy and the sense of past wounds now mended, hope and the quenching coolness of rain so strong Pavel has to open eyes he does not remember closing just to look himself over and see himself dry.

"Oh," Pavel breathes, as Hikaru's cautious smile slowly widens, as tendrils shape themselves in warm green comfort around him, knowing now the true nature of Hikaru's new friend. "Oh, yes. Hello."

Date: 2009-10-15 12:02 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] starsandgraces
That was really rather lovely! Not what I was expecting at all, but possibly even better for that.

Date: 2009-10-18 12:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
It wasn't what I expected to write, either; it's a happy surprise. :)

Date: 2009-10-15 01:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kinkme.livejournal.com
I liked this. And I'm not sure why, so I'm going to be a shit commentator.

This is the first fic I've read with both "tentacles" and "PG" in the description.

Date: 2009-10-18 12:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
I still don't even know how I wrote it with tentacles as PG! That just happened! *laughs in a boggled but delighted manner*

Date: 2009-10-15 01:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blcwriter.livejournal.com
Oh, yes. Hello.

Perhaps the best ending to a fic EVER.

Date: 2009-10-18 12:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*blushes very much* Thank you. :)

Date: 2009-10-15 01:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hollycomb.livejournal.com
awww, I loved this (Hikaru/Plants!!) and I love that it was a kind of sequel to the Jellyfish story. :)

Date: 2009-10-18 12:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Hikaru/plants OTP indeed. :D I'm especially glad you liked this, you know.

*licks your icon's throat*

Date: 2009-10-15 03:03 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] anodyna.livejournal.com
That would mean leaving Hikaru here, so Pavel does not do that. He clears his throat, and folds his arms, and watches Hikaru's eyes ease open then flare wide, watches that blush well up in Hikaru's cheeks and says, "I was worried terribly, and all the while you are canoodeling with a pile of vines."

Hee! This is adorable. I love stories where the plot is something I couldn't have thought of in a million years, and this is definitely one of those. :D

Date: 2009-10-18 01:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*blushes a lot* Thank you. :) There's nothing new under the Sun, as was said, but I do try to put my own spin on things.

Date: 2009-10-15 03:22 pm (UTC)
sage: Still of Natasha Romanova from Iron Man 2 (st-reboot: pike)
From: [personal profile] sage
They are so sweet! Yay for nice surprises. :D

Date: 2009-10-18 01:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Nice surprises, and healing. :D

Date: 2009-10-15 05:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rozenmakai.livejournal.com
i totally was not expecting this after reading the jellyfish alien first
it was most satisfying and sweet fluff considering the tentacle part lol

Date: 2009-10-18 01:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*grin* Thank you very much, not least for telling me I managed the unexpected.

Date: 2009-10-15 06:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] panda-pooka.livejournal.com
You're right, you don't HAVE to have read the other fic, but it sure makes a big difference (for the better imo) if you do before reading this one. Very, very nice. It makes so much sense that Pavel would have a mild freak-out, considering what happened to him before, but it's lovely that he trusts Hikaru enough to listen. And, of course, the ending is just lovely. Lovely.

Date: 2009-10-18 01:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
I didn't want people to think they had to brave the NC-17 tentacle-fic, but yeah, this is definetely a sequel. I'm just glad to hear it worked. :)

Date: 2009-10-15 10:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] arathesane.livejournal.com
Ooh, I really like this! I'm off to read the other part now!

Date: 2009-10-18 01:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*laughs* I hope you enjoyed it, and weren't unduly horrified. ;)

Date: 2009-10-16 08:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emmademarais.livejournal.com
It is far too late and I am far too tired to be commenting at all, but having loved the first one I had to read this.

If you remind me I shall offer proper adoration later, but for now just know that I send a few friendly fronds your way in gratitude for this piece. ♥

Date: 2009-10-18 01:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*huggles you tightly and gratefully, friendly fronds and all*

Date: 2009-10-16 12:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jessofthebugs.livejournal.com
That was the sweetest tentacle fic ever!

...and I can't believe I just typed that.

Date: 2009-10-18 01:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*giggles delightedly* Hey, I still can't believe I wrote a sweet, PG tentacle fic.

Date: 2009-10-17 01:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lindmere.livejournal.com
I could go on and on about your (usual) beautiful imagery, but what I really want to say is that your compassion and open-mindedness really comes through in your fics. To imagine connecting with a completely different life form on an emotional and sexual level, and then to want to share it with someone else, as Sulu does, is such a lovely idea and so in keeping with the spirit of Star Trek.

Date: 2009-10-18 01:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Compassion and open-mindedness! Oh, you have made my day. :D Thank you, very very much, for this wonderful comment which I shall endeavor to continue deserving.

Date: 2009-10-20 02:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crackemod.livejournal.com
Hi. Just wanted to let you know that your story has been recced here (http://community.livejournal.com/crackenterprise/33757.html) on [livejournal.com profile] crackenterprise.

Date: 2009-10-24 04:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
I am so sorry it's taken me so long to thank you, but let me just say, THANK YOU. A lot.

Date: 2009-10-20 06:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yjh.livejournal.com
That was so very sweet!

Date: 2009-10-24 04:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Thank you, so much!

Date: 2009-10-20 10:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] twisting-vine-x.livejournal.com
but this is not that planet, and Hikaru vouches for this plant

Aaaaaawwwww. :D

Date: 2009-10-24 04:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*curtseys* Thank you. :)

Date: 2009-11-03 04:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rodneyscat.livejournal.com
Oh! Lovely and sensual. I love Chekov's surprised and breathless 'Hello' at the end and how pleased Sulu is with this :D

Date: 2009-11-04 03:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*beams at you* Thank you, for this and for today's lovely flurry of comments. :)

Date: 2010-04-05 08:37 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-04-08 03:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*curtseys* :D

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