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Title: Condition of Distraction
Fandom: Star Trek XI
Rating: Not quite NC-17 Hard R
Pairing: Captain Christopher Pike/Cadet Pavel Chekov
Summary: Pavel is interviewed by the Captain of the Enterprise. From this Kink Meme prompt.
Content Advisory: I scandalized my roommate with this. Um, slash including a 17-year-old and power differentials.
All Thanks To: My roommate for making this a better story by being scandalized.
Disclaimer: None of these characters or their settings belong to me.
Author's Note: My mind has thought alike to a great one. Any similarities between this and [livejournal.com profile] robanybody's Burn These Bridges From The Other Side are actually entirely coincidental -- we were writing at the same time, no less.




"So you're the whiz kid I've heard so much about." Captain Pike leans back in his desk chair, raking Pavel with an appraising blue gaze. "Top marks in everything from particle physics to Astrogation, on track to graduate this spring, and how old are you, boy?"

"Seventeen, sir." When his voice doesn't crack, Pavel lifts his chin a little higher, and a small approving smile warms Pike's features; the pleasure of accomplishment, of earning that smile, shivers through Pavel's belly, vibrating into his cock. Pike keeps looking at him, into him, the corners of his eyes crinkling as his smile slowly widens, and Pavel's cheeks prickle as he feels himself hardening. He has to bite his lip to drive it down again, concentrating on the sharp bright pain; it must make him look uncertain and young, and his cheeks flare and burn.

"We have cadets entering at your age who think they're precocious." Pike nods at Pavel, and it feels like achieving a perfect score, the highest grade. "Come let me have a look at you."

"Yes, sir!" Pavel bounces out of his seat, too fast; he takes a breath and a moment to make his movement deliberate as he walks around the desk, feeling Pike's gaze like large hands on his shoulders, on his waist or his face. He stops at the corner but Pike flicks his fingers, motioning him closer, so he steps up until their knees almost touch.

Pike looks him over thoroughly, up and down. He reaches up, and the rough brush of blunt fingers on Pavel's cheek reverberates through him, knocking loose a small gasp. "Easy on the eyes, too," Pike says in the same dry, warm tone as he just described Pavel's academic accomplishments. "I understand you won the Academy marathon this year?"

"Yes, sir," Pavel manages to croak around his heart hammering in his throat.

"Stamina, then." Pike tilts his head slightly, still looking up at Pavel, turns his hand and deliberately brushes his knuckles over Pavel's cheek. "Cadet, do you want to serve on the Enterprise?" Pavel hesitates, his nerves crackling, trying to determine how many questions are included in this one, and Pike leans his chin on his other hand as he smiles at Pavel again, warm and kindly, eyes sparkling. "Just answer that for now."

The bare hint of command in Pike's voice firms Pavel's spine, settles his whirling thoughts, focuses his answer and his desire. "Yes, sir. I wish to navigate for the Enterprise."

Pike nods, and drops his hand from Pavel's face, though Pavel can still feel the memory flickering over his skin. "Do you want me to touch you again? An entirely unrelated question, I promise."

"Oh, yes, sir, please." Pavel almost sways with eagerness. He wants those blunt fingers on his skin again, on his face, everywhere.

"Then come here." Pike pats his thigh, and Pavel does not have to be asked twice. He settles his back against Pike's upraised arm, his lanky thighs perpendicular to Pike's muscular ones. Pike smiles approvingly as he raises his hand again, cupping Pavel's jaw. "Definitely," he says slowly, voice gravelly with mounting heat, "easy on the eyes. And the hands."

"Sir," Pavel whispers, his throat so tight his voice must surely shatter, and Pike brings him close with the gentlest tug and kisses him very lightly, undemandingly, leaving it to Pavel to choose the intensity, to set the course. Pavel pushes hard into it, mashing their mouths together, and Pike chuckles deep in his throat, tightens his hold into a command and kisses him firmly and deeply for a long breathtaking moment.

Pike breaks the kiss, and Pavel has to swallow his whine, clenches his hands into fists to hold himself still as Pike strokes the hinge of his jaw with two fingers, then lets go. "Before we get distracted," he says, motioning to his console, and Pavel glances over to find a navigation simulator running. "See anything strange?"

Pavel concentrates, against the hard thighs beneath his, against his own throbbing arousal, and looks at one rather awful star system, all comets and swarming planetoids and tilted retrograde orbits, and beyond it a patchwork of thick nebulas, black holes, and other hazards. The star designated as the destination glimmers at the upper right corner of the screen.

"Difficult navigation, sir," Pavel says, and flushes warm with pride when his voice doesn’t shake, at least until Pike's thumbstroke along the base of his skull makes him jump.

"Indeed." Pike nudges Pavel's thigh, and he takes hold of the polished desk and Pike's firm shoulder and turns himself to face forwards, Pike's chest a wall of heat at his back, his ass settled on Pike's undeniable bulge. "Supposing you had a captain crazy enough to want to make that trip, or desperate enough to need to, give me two routes each optimized for safety, time, and the best compromises between." Pavel reaches for the keyboard, but Pike's broad hands folds around his upper arm, halting him. "But first." Pike's fingers slide firmly up the length of Pavel's trapped erection. "Let's see how you function under conditions of distraction," he murmurs, efficiently opening Pavel's fly.

"Oh, bozhe-- God, my God." For one heart-stopped second, Pavel stares down at Pike's hand pushing into his pants, curling around his cock. For another he shuts his eyes, swallowing hard, listening to Pike breathe a chuckle and the thud of his pulse resuming in his ears.

"Ensign," Pike says, low and steely in Pavel's ear, "can you do that?" Four blunt fingers and a calloused palm all ripple around Pavel's cock, thumb stroking the crease behind the head.

"Yes, Captain." Pavel shudders, pushing down the whimper quivering in the back of his throat. He opens his eyes, focuses on the console screen, and reaches for the keyboard with both hands. "I can do that."

Date: 2009-09-08 12:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blcwriter.livejournal.com
Evil, evil woman. Bless you.

Date: 2009-09-09 06:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*curtseys* Thank you. :D

Date: 2009-09-08 12:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] claudia-nic.livejournal.com
Am reading at work...should definitely not do that again : )

Date: 2009-09-09 06:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Meep, be careful! But, thank you for taking the chance on me. :)

Date: 2009-09-08 12:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] just-jane-doe.livejournal.com
*thud*



Ridiculously hot, that. Good. Lord.

Date: 2009-09-09 06:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*grins and fans you*

Date: 2009-09-08 12:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] merkuria.livejournal.com
Reading at work. Will go to hell.

Also, hot damn :D

Date: 2009-09-09 06:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Hell will be so much fun!

Date: 2009-09-08 02:41 pm (UTC)
skipping: (Chess Pike)
From: [personal profile] skipping
Reading this while feeling like I may throw up on someone may have been a bad idea if I hadn't made me feel about ten times better. Very very nice and hot as hell.

Date: 2009-09-08 02:42 pm (UTC)
skipping: (Chess Pike)
From: [personal profile] skipping
*it

That tells you how ill I feel, can't type right to save my life.

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From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com - Date: 2009-09-09 06:48 pm (UTC) - Expand

Date: 2009-09-08 03:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] randysugardandy.livejournal.com
i now ship this lOVERLY(hotness)wrongness..:D

faciel blue screen of death cuasingly hot i may so.

Date: 2009-09-09 06:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*giggle* Thank you, very much. :)

Date: 2009-09-08 03:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] severinne.livejournal.com
Oh my freakin' God, yes. That was way too hot. Pike is way too hot, but damned if that isn't exactly how I like him :D

Date: 2009-09-09 06:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Captain Pike is just incandescently hot. I walked out of my first viewing of the movie with such a massive crush on him, and it hasn't at all abated.

Date: 2009-09-08 05:27 pm (UTC)
ext_129022: (waste of space)
From: [identity profile] introductory.livejournal.com
Oh my god. Hello. I've always had a kink for mixing work and play -- hot!

Date: 2009-09-09 06:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*beam* Thank you. It's such a dangerous cocktail, work and play mixed, but so heady!

Date: 2009-09-08 05:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eeyore9990.livejournal.com
I just had to reach up and physically uncross my eyes. Holy hell, awesome kink pushing! LOVE it!

Date: 2009-09-09 06:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Wow. Thank you very much for this most vivid compliment!

Date: 2009-09-08 06:46 pm (UTC)
ext_38142: (Default)
From: [identity profile] starlettmalfoy.livejournal.com
Gah. Ruby. Seriously. Just marry me and let's get this whole dancing-around-each-other thing over with already. ;)

Thanks for sharing, love! MOAR, I SAY! *g*

Date: 2009-09-09 06:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*blushes to match my userpic* It's not every day a girl gets a marriage proposal in her inbox! I am so glad you enjoy my stories, and this one in particular.

Date: 2009-09-08 07:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caiusmajor.livejournal.com
Oh man. And this is EXCELLENT training for life on the Enterprise. :D

Date: 2009-09-09 06:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*dies laughing* AHAHAHA, yes, yes it is.

Date: 2009-09-08 10:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jlm121.livejournal.com
why oh why wasn't this in the movie.

Chekov/Pike is one of my secret ships.

This is just wonderful

Date: 2009-09-09 06:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
I have rarely seen a source that managed to pack so much slashiness into such small interactions, you know? I don't know why, but they make a (dirty, wrong, glorious) kind of sense to me. I'm really glad to hear I conveyed that somewhat. :)

Date: 2009-09-08 10:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] robanybody.livejournal.com
God, I love how sensual your writing is. And the mix of affection and lust that Pike shows Chekov is just wonderful and hot. *applause*

Date: 2009-09-09 07:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*blushes* Thank you, very much. :D I had a lot of fun with this one. I think it's that image of Pike with someone on his lap, it's undeniable, innit?

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From: [identity profile] robanybody.livejournal.com - Date: 2009-09-09 10:32 pm (UTC) - Expand

Date: 2009-09-09 03:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] flwrpwr-vampyre.livejournal.com
Holy fucking shit. You have blown my mind with the hotness of this and you didn't even write out the sex! God though, Pavel cursing when Pike touched his dick. If you'll pardon me, I'll be in my bunk.

Date: 2009-09-09 07:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*grins* I am especially glad that you liked this. :D

Date: 2009-09-09 10:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] callieach.livejournal.com
To hell with anonymity...

THIS WAS THE BEST REQUEST I EVER MADE ON THAT GODFORSAKEN KINK MEME.
GUH.

Date: 2009-09-10 03:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*jumps for joy like my icon* OMG, your request. When I finished ROTFL I lay there with an idea blooming in my head, and then I climbed right back up into my chair and wrote it down. This was *so much fun*. Thank you. :D

Date: 2009-09-09 11:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] petronelle.livejournal.com
The daddy kink is *strong* with this one. WHEE!

Date: 2009-09-10 03:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*blush* No one will believe me if I say that's not actually one of my kinks, right? It's all the fandom!

Date: 2009-09-10 03:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] strickens-girl.livejournal.com
Oh yeah, that's the stuff. Fantastic!

Date: 2009-09-10 03:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*grin* Thank you. :D

Date: 2009-09-10 10:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dirty-smudge.livejournal.com
Pike, you old dog.

Date: 2009-09-11 02:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*collapses agiggle*
(PS I'm especially glad you liked this, what with your gorgeous Pike/Chekov.)

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From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com - Date: 2009-09-11 02:16 pm (UTC) - Expand

Date: 2009-09-13 12:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] possibly-thrice.livejournal.com
I keep trying to think of something to say here and then getting utterly lost in the ohgodhotness and basically it's either incoherent oozing or nothing, so, here, have a run-on full up with complimentary gurgling.

Date: 2009-09-13 01:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Woohoo! I induced gurling!

Captain Pike is a sexy beast, and I keep wanting to put cute people on his lap. I'm definetely glad you approve of the results. :)

Date: 2009-09-21 02:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hollycomb.livejournal.com
omg! I want like 10,000 more words of this. ;)

Date: 2009-09-21 06:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
So do I, but Pavel was concentrating too hard to tell me any more!

*licks your icon's throat*

Date: 2009-09-21 09:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] takhallus.livejournal.com
Lol awesome! I never went for this pairing before but that was hot

Date: 2009-09-29 04:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!

Date: 2009-09-29 03:04 am (UTC)
ext_16103: (vtf?)
From: [identity profile] tallycola.livejournal.com
I'll be in my bunk!

Date: 2009-09-29 04:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*grins muchly*

Date: 2009-11-11 02:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] simmysim.livejournal.com
I read the USS one first, so this just seems so incredibly sweet. I guess it shouldn't, considering it's like a superior officer groping an underling but idk it's Pike♥ And it's so fatherly and warm! Your Pike voice is perfect, I could easily hear him saying each line. Inngjkfdn the visual of Chekov perched in Pike's lab is so incredibly hot and sweet, thank you so much for giving it to me, lol.

Date: 2009-11-11 08:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Freakazoid! \o/

You're very welcome, and thank you so very much! When I said that my roommate made this better by being scandalized, what I was referring to was that I told her the idea and she said, "OMG, PIKE HAS A CASTING COUCH." So when writing it I did my best to... not deny, but to ameliorate that? To make it seem sweet and non-threatening for all that, well, this is a captain hitting on a cadet (an underage cadet, no less) who wants a position on his ship.

Oh, the things fanfic lets us write that would be just so wrong in less fictional settings. *giggle*

Date: 2010-03-24 03:35 pm (UTC)
ext_367923: (Anton)
From: [identity profile] easilymused1956.livejournal.com
Okay. Now I'm wondering what SPOCK'S interview was like.

Deliciously kinky story here. Thank you very much!

Renee

Date: 2010-03-27 08:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
AHAHAHA oh, that's a mental image.

You're very welcome, and thank you for telling me so!

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