One Soft Spot (Numb3rs drabble, NC-17 with warnings)

[browngirl]

Title: One Soft Spot
Fandom: Numb3rs
Rating: NC-17 with warnings.
Pairing: Don/Charlie (like you all didn't see this coming)
Warnings/Spoilers: Slash, incest, my usual wrongness.
Author's Note: Written for the N3100 Prompt of "Toast". #2 of 4 in the sequence.
Acknowledgements: lomedet. *beams*
Disclaimer: None of these characters or their settings belong to me.



Don gasps beneath Charlie's hand slickly rough around his dick, Charlie straddling his thighs, Charlie's teeth sweetly sharp on his throat. "Dammit, easy." His whole body hums like an overloading circuit, Charlie's teeth press in and it hurts so fucking good, but... "Don't, stop."

That, and Don tugging a handful of curls, makes Charlie finally pull his hot mouth off Don's neck, blinking open big indignant eyes. "What?"

"Marks," Don insists through the brainfog. "Don't mark me--"

"Or we're toast." Charlie grins wickedly. "I get that." No, he doesn't, but he strokes Don hard, kissing harder, and Don can only moan.

Comments

[1trackmind.livejournal.com]

"Or we're toast." Charlie grins wickedly. "I got that." No, he hasn't, but he strokes Don hard, kissing harder, and Don can only moan.

Oh, very nice! I always love your Don/Charlie, I really do.

BTW, that's why my Charlie generally marks the inner thigh where no one should be looking anyway ;) He can't help it. I think even the more mature version of Charlie we've seen is always going to be a little insecure where Don and his affection are concerned. And that's before you get to the insecurity due to Don's inability to be faithful.

Then again, in your universe Charlie's not being faithful either so maybe he doesn't care about Don's fidelity or lack thereof. Is this lust or something more? What do you think?

As for the drabble itself, very sexy and hot. Though Charlie might think if Don's coherent enough to stop him he's still got some work to do. But maybe not.

[rubynye.livejournal.com]

Eee, I adore your comments, I do. I think this was more fun to read than my drabble! It took me awhile to stop imagining Don's thigh with bite marks on it and actually write a *reply* to this.

The Charlie of my Charlie/Don stories does have that insecurity about Don, in part because in this fictional universe he knows that the years Don spent away from their family are in part because of their intermittent affair and Don's attempts to escape it (I write on the "they've been doing this, including swearing it off, over and over for years" model.) Neither of them would be doing this if it were just lust; they could probably find people who resemble each other (and have, and one day I'm so writing those stories). But no one else is Don for Charlie or Charlie for Don.

If I get around to writing more gen about Don and Charlie (which I hope to) I'm going to explore how that insecurity and entanglement comes out when it's not in an illicit incestuous affair. But this version is dirty wrong fun. ;)

[1trackmind.livejournal.com]

Eee, I adore your comments, I do. I think this was more fun to read than my drabble!

Wow, thank you so much!

It took me awhile to stop imagining Don's thigh with bite marks on it and actually write a *reply* to this.

It is a lovely image, isn't it?

Neither of them would be doing this if it were just lust; they could probably find people who resemble each other (and have, and one day I'm so writing those stories). But no one else is Don for Charlie or Charlie for Don.

I think that has to be true in any universe. If it wasn't more than lust there's no way they'd get involved. Even Don isn't that self-destructive.

I think those would be very fun drabbles to read.

But this version is dirty wrong fun. ;)

It is! I always love your Don/Charlie and I'm always craving more. I try not to be too resentful of the time your Charlie gets with Amita.

[emmademarais.livejournal.com]

Pairing: Don/Charlie (like you all didn't see this coming)

Hehehe

This Charlie intrigues me. He lies blithely to Amita, he flaunts Don's concerns and seems oddly amoral about his infidelity and committing a felony.

To which I say good show! /applauds/

(Hey, complex Charlies are the best Charlies!)

Looking forward to the next two!

[rubynye.livejournal.com]

I really should write a proper thank-you, but really, I'm just filled with glee by your comment. As ever, of course. :D

[devon99.livejournal.com]

My goodness!!

Very naughty boys.

Fab stuff.

[rubynye.livejournal.com]

*curtseys* Thank you, very much. :)

[sororcula.livejournal.com]

Oh, I love it, and I loooove your use of the prompt.

[rubynye.livejournal.com]

*laugh* I felt a little like it was cheating to use the prompt that way, but that line is the core of my plotbunny, so... I'm really glad you liked this. :)

[(Anonymous)]

(ahh, sorry, I am on a different computer now and too lazy to log in. But it's really me, I promise!)

I love this because whenever I see a prompt posted at numb3rs100 I ALWAYS try to come up with different meanings for the word. The first one I ever wrote used "champagne" as a color instead of the drink, and I was like... totally proud of myself for that. LOL.

[melissima.livejournal.com]

Don gasps beneath Charlie's hand slickly rough around his dick, Charlie straddling his thighs, Charlie's teeth sweetly sharp on his throat. "Dammit, easy." His whole body hums like an overloading circuit, Charlie's teeth press in and it hurts so fucking good, but... "Don't, stop."

Nnnnghhhh.....I...uh...mmmm....

I'm too loopy from reading that to count how many of my kinks it hits. Suffice it to say I have a big, embarrassingly sloppy grin on my face and I'm on my 3rd reread in ten minutes.

[rubynye.livejournal.com]

*fans you and grins very much*

[admiralandrea.livejournal.com]

:ovaries go splodey:

[rubynye.livejournal.com]

*giggles* On the one hand, yay that I evoked that! On the other, the fandom would never forgive me if I made you explode!

[admiralandrea.livejournal.com]

Oh, I'm quite sure fandom wouldn't even notice I was gone!

[rubynye.livejournal.com]

Tosh. :)