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For my week of posting my Porn Ficlets! Rather edited from that version.

Title: Sightlines
Rating: hard R
Pairing: Billy Cooper/Charlie Eppes/Don Eppes
Warnings: incest, slash, threesome. But no spoilers!
Summary: Three viewpoints.
Fandom & Prompt: Numb3rs, Don/Charlie, certainty
Disclaimer: The characters herein do not belong to me.



Don sees Charlie, flattened to the bed, covered by Coop's broad back, clutching at his shoulder and the nape of his neck where sweat darkens the short light hair. Charlie's arching, squirming, one long golden leg hooked around Coop's waist, the air thick with the tang of their mingled sweat. Charlie's head is tipping back against the mattress, Coop's big fingers tangled in his dark curls; his hands cupping Charlie's head, Coop presses his face into Charlie's throat, his jaw moving slowly, his hips rolling slowly, Charlie's mouth fluttering between just parted and frankly open. Coop rumbles and Charlie shudders, a guttural moan breaking as he clenches his teeth, his eyes closing tightly, his lashes damp-dark and a red flush rising on his cheekbones. But Charlie's eyes flutter open again almost immediately, round and huge and dark, his gaze unwavering, and Don can't look away.

Charlie sees Don, like a breathing statue, wrists bound with his own tie to the slats behind him, his half-buttoned white shirt framing a vee of warm skin below the dip at the base of his throat. Don's eyes are narrowed, his lips parted as if he might say something, though all the sound from him is harsh breathing; his head is tipped back, baring his throat, just like Charlie bared his for Billy when Billy grinned and pushed him down on the bed, plundered his mouth until it throbbed and then started working on the world's most intense hickey. Billy growls as he bites down over Charlie's pulse, so very slowly, and when Charlie shudders, his eyes pressing shut despite his best efforts, he can hear Don shudder too, breath stuttering. He pushes against the squared edge of Billy's shoulder, writhing into Billy's immovable weight on him, watching Don's lower lip tremble as his lips part another millimeter.

Billy Cooper sees them both in his mind's eye, his own eyes covered with dark curls and his tongue pressed to the pulse in Charlie's throat, the throb of blood rushing just beneath the glowing skin. Charlie's grinding against his abs, hands surprisingly tight on his neck and his shoulder, and he humps the sheets as he sucks hard enough to taste a little of all that energy coursing through Don's pretty little brother. In another moment or three, once he hears that sweet little broken noise out of Charlie's mouth one more time, Billy's going to let go and rear up and fuck him, holding Charlie down with both hands in those round curls, feeling Charlie shudder around him as he watches them watch each other until he can't stand it anymore and he has to close his eyes as he comes. Then he'll grin as he catches Don's eye, and ask Don what he'll do if his Coop unties him right that moment, and Billy knows, sure as he can feel Charlie shake beneath him, what Don's answer will be.

Date: 2008-08-04 06:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] admiralandrea.livejournal.com
Woah! That was so intense and so very hot! Lovely imagery in there, especially of Don. Yum!
Edited Date: 2008-08-04 06:03 pm (UTC)

Date: 2008-08-05 12:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
I think your icon turned me as red as my icon. *blushes mightily*

I'm really glad you liked this!

Date: 2008-08-05 05:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] admiralandrea.livejournal.com
Oops, sorry! I tend to forget not everyone is as kinky as me!

Date: 2008-08-06 01:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Oh no, that was a very appreciative blush on my part!

(God, Don's *smile*. Do you have the best userpics or what?)

Date: 2008-08-06 05:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] admiralandrea.livejournal.com
Thanks. I do have some of my own, but most are gathered from the awesome icon makers around. All are credited in my user pics, but where there is no name, I made them. Which you can usually tell by the less than stellar quality.

Date: 2008-08-04 07:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emmademarais.livejournal.com
Wow, restraints are so sexy and denial on top of it? A recipe for hot, if you ask me. I really liked this. Wonderful structure too. It makes me wish I'd thought of it. Great job!

Date: 2008-08-05 12:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*blushes* You think of many amazing and nifty things, though. :)

Thank you for telling me you liked this.

Date: 2008-08-04 07:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] devo79.livejournal.com
well that was...HOT!

Date: 2008-08-05 12:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*laughs very much at your icon*

Thank you, very much. :)

Date: 2008-08-04 07:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 1trackmind.livejournal.com
Oh very nice! I hope he does untie him.

Date: 2008-08-05 12:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Eventually. ;)

Thank you for commenting on this!

Date: 2008-08-05 09:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sockich.livejournal.com
...I'll be in my bunk.

(omfg so unbelievably, mindblowingly hot. guh)

Date: 2008-08-06 01:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*beam* Thank you. :) That's what I was hoping for...

Date: 2008-08-06 12:21 pm (UTC)

Date: 2008-08-06 01:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Thank you very much!

Don and Charli and Coop, Oh My!

Date: 2008-10-26 09:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] quasardrake.livejournal.com
OMG my brain just melted. _Fans self vigorously_ **Iz Ded**

Where is my husband when I need him damnit??!!

Jeeze louise that was incredibly hot. I just love D/C/? threesomes and Coop and Colby are my 2 faves for the third party. Unfortunately there's, like, four of these in the entirety of the Numb3rs fanverse as far as I can find.

This was so hot it had me squirming and there isn't even anything really explicit it it! I just LOVE it when that happens! Gah!! Have to breathe slowly here for a while.

So nice that such talented writing is being expended on such lovely stuff! Keep on keeping on, as they say....

Re: Don and Charli and Coop, Oh My!

Date: 2008-10-27 02:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*fans you gratefully* I will definetely try to keep on keeping on. :) Thank you *so* much for these wonderful comments!

(Don/Charlie/Colby. That's a thought...)

Date: 2008-10-26 09:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] quasardrake.livejournal.com
By the way, where can I find the UN-edited version?? **Jumps up and down excitedly at the thought** I really loved the symmetry of this version - three paragraphs, one for each person and their POV - but if there is more I want all that delectable yummyness on my screen....Please gods tell me it's still around....

Date: 2008-10-27 02:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
My word, you are spoiling me with spectacular comments.

Alas, this is all there is; I edited this for grammar and word choice from the version posted at [livejournal.com profile] oxoniensis's porn battle. If anything, I made it pornier. :)

Speajing of Coop/Don/Charlie, have you read Home is Just A Phone Call Away by [livejournal.com profile] missmollyetc?
Edited Date: 2008-10-27 02:02 am (UTC)

D/C/Coop

Date: 2008-10-27 06:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] quasardrake.livejournal.com
Ah. Darn it. Well ok - if there was much more I don't know if it wouldn't just result in lots of melted goo in chairs all over the word.....Was kinda wondering if Billy ever let Don go (incredibly hot visual rolls thru brain) ;-)

No I haven't read that but I will hustle on over there as soon as I can! Thanks.

Have a good week!

Date: 2009-03-30 07:50 pm (UTC)
spikedluv: (n3: coop - smile by delgaserasca)
From: [personal profile] spikedluv
Muh! That was extremely hot. *g*

Date: 2009-03-31 01:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*beam* Thank you, and thank you for illustrating it with a Coop icon! \o/ This was the second NUMB3RS story I ever wrote.

Fic Recs - Numb3rs

Date: 2009-05-01 06:01 am (UTC)
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