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Because today is Bartday , and how could I not do something for Bart?

Title: A Theory of Tickling
Fandom: DC Comics
Characters: Tim, Bart (Robin, Impulse)
Rating: PG at the outside, but not quite G.
Based on: General YJ or maybe early Teen Titans.
Disclaimer: Not mine, I just love them.
Dedicated To: [livejournal.com profile] glossing, with all love.


"Did you know---"

As Tim looks up from The Way We Live Now he braces for impact. Those words have been coming out of Bart's mouth more and more often lately.

"---you can't tickle yourself?" Bart has a white softcover book in one hand and one of Tim's gauntlets in the other, as if he's about to start juggling. "How come?"

Tim tosses his other gauntlet to Bart, who does start juggling in a cascade pattern. "It has to do with surprise, I think. Surprise, danger, and control."

"Surprise? How can you surprise yourself?" Bart switches to a box pattern, the book spinning back and forth between his hands, Tim's gauntlets sailing up and down. Tim's had more difficult weeks, but he is tired, and the effect is still mildly mesmerizing. "Unless maybe if you were hypnotized, or---"

"That's the point." Tim doesn't have to raise his voice over Bart's these days. "You can't."

"Not ever?" Bart adds the TV remote, crisscrossing it with the book. Each object can still be seen, but he's probably using his speed to toss the book and the remote simultaneously. "What if you were by yourself and wanted to be tickled?"

"Well..." Tim considers this, for no good reason. "There is one way to tickle yourself, with your tongue and your palate. It's the danger of choking."

"So tickling is dangerous, the fun kind of dangerous." Bart spins his juggling into a shower, the items making a white-black-green wheel in his hands. "But you can only do it to yourself with your tongue. Can you tickle someone else with your tongue?"

Tim blinks, and visualizes, and his homework falls to the floor. Bart's still talking, the things he's juggling a uniform whitish-green blur. "Can you tickle someone invulnerable? Hey, do you think Kon's ticklish?" Tim catches his gauntlets before he sees them; Bart's breeze ruffles his hair and the book on his lap, and there's shouting in the rec room.

Which is okay, really. Tim's still stuck on the image of tickling with tongues, and the shouting from the rec room really doesn't sound unhappy. He really is distractable today.

He doesn't have time to properly meditate, but Tim is just succeeding in calming his pulse when another gust of wind accompanies Bart back to his room. "You totally can!" he announces. "Tickle someone invulnerable. Even through TK if you go fast enough. But--"

Bart vanishes. Tim strikes in the most likely direction, but Bart's arms wind around his waist from his other side; his stealth is improving. "I still don't know if you can tickle someone through armor." Bart snickers in Tim's ear, fingers buzzing over Tim's ribs.

He really can feel Bart through his suit, vibrating, well, ticklishly, no matter what way he twists. "Don't try ih---" is as far as Tim gets before he loses it laughing, which has to be an all-time low. He's really not focused today, and at the moment, as Bart laughs and keeps up the tickle attack, Tim can't quite make himself mind.

Date: 2007-06-20 12:52 pm (UTC)
gloss: woman in front of birch tree looking to the right (Young Justice rules)
From: [personal profile] gloss
!!!
Oh, Ny, this is pure love and so very, very Young Justice that I'm squeeing and rocking myself. There's nothing like attempting-grimness!Tim and the sheer beauty of Bart's cheerful obliviousness, you know?

I LOVE THIS. Thank you so much.

Date: 2007-06-23 09:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*beam* Thank you, brighteyes, and you're very welcome. I didn't have much time compared to how I usually write, but I wanted to make this as good as I could, in your honor, and Bart's. :D

*huggles you*

Date: 2007-06-20 01:38 pm (UTC)
vass: Robin carries Impulse (Slash!)
From: [personal profile] vass
*beam* Oh Bart!

Date: 2007-06-23 09:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*grin* I'm really glad I managed to capture a bit of the brightness that is Bart, and that this little story pleased you.

Date: 2007-06-20 01:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] quietann.livejournal.com
this is definitely worth giggling over; thank you!

Date: 2007-06-23 09:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*curtseys* Thank you for telling me so. :)

Date: 2007-06-20 02:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] oneangrykate.livejournal.com
This is adorable. Oh, boys. Oh, Bart. Oh, juggling.

Date: 2007-06-23 09:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*beam* Thank you. :D

Date: 2007-06-20 03:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caiusmajor.livejournal.com
Oh BART. This is adorable!

Date: 2007-06-23 09:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Bart deserves all the credit, really. Well, maybe Tim does a little. :D

Date: 2007-06-20 03:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-sarai.livejournal.com
Oh, BART! Oh, Tim! Oh, boys!

My day is officially made. I shall be grinning through my work now.

Date: 2007-06-23 09:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Yay! I am glad I could make your day. Your comment helped make mine.

Date: 2007-06-20 03:49 pm (UTC)
gingicat: deep purple lilacs, some buds, some open (Default)
From: [personal profile] gingicat
Hee! I happen to have a thing for juggling, so that makes it even better.

Date: 2007-06-23 09:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
I will remember that. *reads up on juggling*. :D

Date: 2007-06-20 04:18 pm (UTC)
ext_11844: (YJ Pile)
From: [identity profile] amarin-rose.livejournal.com
♥ Oh, this is adorable and full of squee. :)

Date: 2007-06-23 09:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*big smile* Thank you.

Date: 2007-06-20 04:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] museofspeed.livejournal.com
Awww.

Love this. You win.

Date: 2007-06-23 09:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*curtseys* Thank you for telling me so. :D

Date: 2007-06-20 05:26 pm (UTC)
ilyena_sylph: picture of Labyrinth!faerie with 'careful, i bite' as text (bloodred)
From: [personal profile] ilyena_sylph
Awwwww!!!

This is just so sweet!!

*hugs the YJ!ness of it soverytight.

Date: 2007-06-23 09:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*hugs the YJers too*

Date: 2007-06-20 05:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blueswan9.livejournal.com
So. Much. Love. Juggling and stealth tickle attacks, it's just so Bart. You really captured the feel of the YJ gang.

Date: 2007-06-23 10:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Thank you! I do love them, so I'm delighted to be told I did well by them.

Date: 2007-06-20 05:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] second-batgirl.livejournal.com
Oh, Bart! *loves*

Date: 2007-06-23 10:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Bart now and forever!

Date: 2007-06-20 07:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] katarik.livejournal.com
I am suddenly entirely cheerful and happy. BART. WHEE. :DDDDDDDDDD

Mmmm, tickling with tongues. You go *right* on testing that theory, Bart.

*smooshes them all together*

Date: 2007-06-23 10:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Making you happy makes me happy. :D

Date: 2007-06-20 07:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kagehikario.livejournal.com
Oh I really needed this today. Thanks ^_^ SOMEONE can write Bart correctly...

Date: 2007-06-23 10:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*curtseys* Thank you, very much. :)

Date: 2007-06-20 07:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sockich.livejournal.com
*flails with GLEE*

Oh, BOYS! BOYS! ♥ ♥ ♥

This is absolutely perfect and Bart and Tim and tickling and YAY! So much YAY!

Date: 2007-06-23 10:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Oh, goodness. *blushes* Thank you. :)

Date: 2007-06-20 07:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zoe-chan.livejournal.com
EE! ::loves on both of them:: I shall happily go on with my housework and job applications! :-D

Date: 2007-06-23 10:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Hooray! Thank *you* for telling me my little tale could inspire you to go on happily with your day. :D

Date: 2007-06-20 08:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] miakun.livejournal.com
Oh, Tim. He needs his friends to just tickle him and have fun. And Bart is such a effervescent pile of *joy*

Date: 2007-06-23 10:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Yes, it's exactly that effervescence I wanted to capture a bit of here. *beams in writerly glee*

Date: 2007-06-21 02:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mel-spiel.livejournal.com
And how many people who read this fic tried to tickle their own palate?

Loved Bart and Robin anticpating a tickle attack. Fun fic.

Date: 2007-06-21 03:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] katarik.livejournal.com
Me! I already knew I could, but still.

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Date: 2007-06-21 09:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pikakao.livejournal.com
Ahhhh! And the image of Bart grabbing Tim by the ribs and vibrating against him is just too cute. Oh, Tim. Your mind goes places. :) Meditate on that, please! Kon getting tickled is so precious. Hee hee hee. ♥ ♥ ♥ (Bart suffers from the good kind of boredom.)

Date: 2007-06-23 10:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
I thought you'd like that mental image. *wink*

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Date: 2007-06-21 10:38 pm (UTC)
libitina: Wei Yingluo from Story of Yanxi Palace in full fancy costume holding a gaiwan and sipping tea (Default)
From: [personal profile] libitina
Hee! They are so cute!

*tongue*

Date: 2007-06-23 10:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
TONGUE. *snickers*

Date: 2007-06-22 01:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] porntestpilot.livejournal.com
Aww. Fantastic Bart!

Date: 2007-06-23 10:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Thank you!

And that's some username. *grin*

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Date: 2007-06-23 07:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] danachan.livejournal.com
!!! Oh! Oh! Oh! So Bart and cute and love and oh! The images here are so great and Bart truly is a thing of love (who just happens to vibrate)! Did love this a whole lot: Which is okay, really. Tim's still stuck on the image of tickling with tongues, and the shouting from the rec room really doesn't sound unhappy. He really is distractable today.

Wheeee! Ah, love, yes.

*emails addendum*

Date: 2007-06-23 10:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Vibration for the win! *cheers*

Thank you, sweetie. I wrote this fast, so I'm trying to view it as a quick ficlet rather than bothering myself with all the edits I could make.

Date: 2007-07-03 10:48 am (UTC)
ext_15675: Bart Allen, Flash, approving. (Bart approves.)
From: [identity profile] winhall.livejournal.com
You know... this won't bring Impulse back. Or Bart for this matter. But it makes me WISH. ...I'll just concentrate on tickling Bart now. :)

Date: 2007-07-03 06:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Hooray for Bart-tickling! \o/

Date: 2007-07-21 06:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hermine-ichigo.livejournal.com
How could I have missed this cute little piece of Bart?
*found it*
Puh!
^^
*grabs Impulse Cos and decides to tickle Cosplay Teammates*
^__^

Wonderful fic...
If I could draw people tickling I'd do it *__*

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