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Here's to the Minoan AU!



"So you would learn a sword?" says the Amazon, smirking down from her great height; she's taller than most men, and brasher too, standing with feet wide-spaced in a knee-short kilt. Anissa wants to stare at the Amazon's brawny long legs, linen strips wrapped round her ankles, toes as henna-red as her hair. She is staring, and she makes herself look up at that challenging smirk, forces her hunching shoulders back. "Why, pretty little lady?"

"I know a sword," Anissa tells her, watching her full mouth twist doubtfully. She wants to shout, but the Amazon obviously thinks her a spoiled daughter of the Palace, flounced and jewelled and delicate; so Anissa sets her feet to the flags, pressing them down till she can feel the Mother's solid body bearing her up, and she keeps her chin up, and she speaks levelly. "And hand-fighting too, enough to lesson a bandit or a ruffian. But I would be better, and I know you can teach me how."

"Oh, I can," says the Amazon, putting her wrist-wrapped hands on her hips. "But can you learn?"

"I can learn," says Anissa, mirroring the gesture. The Amazon cocks her shaggy red head, raking Anissa with her gaze for a long moment, and Anissa keeps herself breathing, keeps her shoulders firm and her chin up.

Then the Amazon laughs, and catches Anissa's chin between two fingers, and kisses her with a plush woman's mouth, harder than a man. "Welcome, pretty sister," she says, squeezing Anissa's chin before letting go. "I'll teach you indeed, and you may call me Grace."

Date: 2007-02-02 03:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] solvent90.livejournal.com
a plush woman's mouth, harder than a man.

*faints* I don't know how you do it, but you write kisses and touches and just looks which are orders of magnitude hotter than full-on sex scenes written by other people. Wow. And the Grace/Anissa dynamic here ... they are fantastically hot anyway, but the Minoan context - "pretty sister", eeee, and the challenging - just adds something. Yes.

Date: 2007-02-04 02:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*laugh* I just realized that twice in a row I used sororal endearments in these ficlets. I'm going to scare people. :)

*beam* Thank you, a lot. I try to... think about how things would feel, I guess. That's how I think being kissed by Grace would feel.

Date: 2007-02-02 03:25 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] gloss
Then the Amazon laughs, and catches Anissa's chin between two fingers, and kisses her with a plush woman's mouth, harder than a man.
GAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. I've been looking forward to this since you showed teased me with a snippet, and it's better than I imagined. So wonderful, so *Anissa* and Grace.

Date: 2007-02-04 02:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*happy dances* I am *so* *so* *so* glad you like this. :D

Anissa and Grace are fun, no matter when.

Date: 2007-02-02 08:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] katarik.livejournal.com
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.

Oh oh oh OH YAYES, I adore Anissa here and oh THEM YES. They're so *them*, but they're also so clearly from that culture and that time and okay, yeah, now I want Diana/Grace.

POSSIBLY GRACE/DIANA/ANISSA.

Date: 2007-02-02 08:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] neneboomerwing.livejournal.com
And now I want Diana/Grace too. Mmm, pretty.

Date: 2007-02-04 02:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Oooh, yes. Mmmm.

Date: 2007-02-04 02:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
OK, Grace/Diana/Anissa makes me think of religious rituals involving the Goddess of Truth or something.

*contemplates*

Date: 2007-02-04 06:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] katarik.livejournal.com
*feeds you peeled grapes*

Date: 2007-02-04 07:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] neneboomerwing.livejournal.com
That's. . .a really hot idea. *makes grabby hand motions*

Date: 2007-02-02 08:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] neneboomerwing.livejournal.com
Woo! This is awesome--I love imagery and the sensations described. Plus, Grace as an amazon? AWESOME!

Love it!

Date: 2007-02-04 02:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*beam* Thank you! In a story I wrote awhile ago, Cassie commented that Grace would make a great Amazon. That was one of those "my character just said something I hadn't thought of but can't help but agree with" moments.

Date: 2007-02-04 07:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] neneboomerwing.livejournal.com
Those are the best moments too--usually you don't notice that it's happened until you're rereading it either and you're like "huh? well, yeah. . .way to go subconscious!"

Good job!

Date: 2007-02-02 08:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] danachan.livejournal.com
slha;s;a gah. Stars and glory, but you know how to write the hot. And this, my dearest, was so hot it broke/melted my brain again. If this becomes a daily occurrence... well, I don't think I'll mind.

*grin*

Date: 2007-02-04 02:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*giggles and fans you* :)

Date: 2007-02-02 11:59 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] brownbetty
YAYS

Just the idea of Grace in a kilt with hennaed toes makes me happy from top to bottom. Also, Anissa as the pretty princess who crushes inappropriately on the roguish warrior. Oh wait, that's canon. BUT STILL.

Date: 2007-02-04 02:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Yay! The mental image made *me* happy, definetely, so I'm glad I could share the joy. :D

Date: 2007-02-03 02:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] miakun.livejournal.com
What is this Minoan thing you mention?

Also, Grace/Anissa is adorable which is amazing, because I wouldn't use the word adorable for Grace. At least not to her face.

Date: 2007-02-04 03:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
The Minoans are the Bronze Age civilization which existed on the Island of Crete in the Aegean sea between 3000 and 1300 BCE. They're my favorite ancient culture, and several of the ficlets I wrote for this project have Minoan settings.

Heh. Grace/Anissa *is* adorable, so I'm really glad I did them justice. Thank you for telling me I did. :) But yeah, I wouldn't call Grace adorable to her face either unless I felt like being dribbled like a basketball.

Date: 2007-02-06 05:07 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Have I ever told you that your AUs make me tingle in my giblets? Nummy. Anissa/Grace are so OTP. Looking back, I love the early Outsiders comics because of this.
-mildredmilton

Date: 2007-02-06 06:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
I'm a giblet-tingler! Go me! *beams delightedly*

(And you've *got* to get your computer to let you log in!)

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