Drawing: I need advice

[browngirl]

Honor system! DO NOT LOOK AT THIS IF YOU HAVE CHILDREN

Below are excerpts from the two versions of my WIP Mother's Day card, and a poll.

#1:

#2:

[Poll #2042017]

I realized that the way I cropped it, it isn't obvious that the larger lady is a hobbit, if that info matters.

(Also, I need an idea for the Father's Day card.)

Comments

[peteralway.livejournal.com]

Since the wings seem more dragonfly-ish than bird-ish, they ought to be more dragonfly-sized, at least in my head.

[browngirl.livejournal.com]

Yeah, that was part of my thinking with the smaller fairies -- the bigger ones seemed to big for their wings and other fairy features.