I was all supportive of your tentacle week anyway, but when I read the first line to this fic it was TOO PERFECT so I had to read the rest. I'll second the pert curve of protein line, but columnar thighs and throbbing baton were also awesome examples of porny language, hot in their cleverness. Also, hickeylike dots \o/ Cthulu voice was hot - and saying that makes me giggle :D
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Date: 2010-07-14 04:49 pm (UTC)