What a gorgeous, perceptive comment! Thank you, so much. :)
In the first draft McCoy's reply to Jim's announcement about the address was "it'll never work," and a kiss. The happy ending is more ambiguous and complex, and that's one of the reasons I went with it.
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Date: 2009-08-19 03:33 am (UTC)In the first draft McCoy's reply to Jim's announcement about the address was "it'll never work," and a kiss. The happy ending is more ambiguous and complex, and that's one of the reasons I went with it.