"gritty and passionate" is precisely what I was going for with this. :) Thank you so much for telling me so!
I changed the ending to happy in part because I knew that fit the request better and in part because I honestly couldn't decide what was truer, the simplicity of tragedy or the complexity of hope.
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Date: 2009-08-19 02:37 am (UTC)I changed the ending to happy in part because I knew that fit the request better and in part because I honestly couldn't decide what was truer, the simplicity of tragedy or the complexity of hope.