I just finished this story and I literally had to pause a few times and just flail for a bit.
I truly want to be coherent in my feedback (and that may take me a little bit before I can be), but I want you to know how much I loved the George/Chris. I didn't expect that to work out as beautifully as it did in my brain, but I loved that so very much. It's actually the first time I read that pairing and I'd never given it a thought before. Excellent.
And I have to tell you, you pushed some major, MAJOR buttons of mine with this story and I'm just... I'm so serious when I tell you that this is one of the hottest, sexiest, most sensual stories I have ever read in my 10+ years of reading fan fiction. Seriously.
Amazing job on this!
ETA: This story scrambled my brain so badly, I failed to mention that I have a super, secret love for Pike/Kirk and I love the way that you portrayed their relationship. Oh, how I loved it. Supremely hot and intense. This is one pairing that I would love to read more of.
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Date: 2009-06-30 03:24 pm (UTC)I truly want to be coherent in my feedback (and that may take me a little bit before I can be), but I want you to know how much I loved the George/Chris. I didn't expect that to work out as beautifully as it did in my brain, but I loved that so very much. It's actually the first time I read that pairing and I'd never given it a thought before. Excellent.
And I have to tell you, you pushed some major, MAJOR buttons of mine with this story and I'm just... I'm so serious when I tell you that this is one of the hottest, sexiest, most sensual stories I have ever read in my 10+ years of reading fan fiction. Seriously.
Amazing job on this!
ETA: This story scrambled my brain so badly, I failed to mention that I have a super, secret love for Pike/Kirk and I love the way that you portrayed their relationship. Oh, how I loved it. Supremely hot and intense. This is one pairing that I would love to read more of.