Date: 2007-03-07 05:36 pm (UTC)
You had me at Donna.

Of course Jason wouldn't complain about a good thing and try to think about logic, he has Donna and Kory on him!

And he GIGGLED! I DIED! AND squealed, because <3<3<3<3!!

Donna's mouth's as bossy as her round stoned eyes aren't, as she kisses him hard as an Amazon and sweet as a chick, kisses him till he can feel her soft mouth like it's all over his skin, perfect and hot and he's so turned on he can't see.

I need to fragment this line, because I love it in bits and pieces and all together so much.

Donna's mouth's as bossy as her round stoned eyes aren't

DONNA! <3 That's just-- I love that her eyes are still Donna sweet, but she's bringing out the Amazonian side in her and Jay totally notices that. It's almost sweet that he's paying attention to her eyes.

as she kisses him hard as an Amazon and sweet as a chick

There are a few jokes I could make about this, because him and comparisons just makes me giggle, because who ELSE has Jay been kissing, huh? And I do love the word "chick" it's just so completely inappropriate and perfect for Jason to use.

kisses him till he can feel her soft mouth like it's all over his skin, perfect and hot and he's so turned on he can't see.

I can't blame him, because woah. I love that "all over his skin" part, Jason just seems so overwhelmed and gleeful at this turn of events.

Man, there are just so many good lines in this.

She bites his lip, gasps like he bit hers, and bites him again more sharply, a little too hard in the best way.

Little sick masochistic freak that I love. And the bad jokes, oh boy you are a Robin.

Rena sounds like she has an accent, pops gum and smacks Jason on the arm when he's being obnoxious. I like that. And behind the music rooms, oh Jason.

And before that, [...] he was in uniform on a Gotham roof after a really good fight.

I will not make guesses as to what this implies, I will just point out that it could imply lots of things (becauseJayisamanho) and I love that.

How would any guy with enough blood in him to lift a dick turn this down unless he was completely totally off the scale queer?

Oh god, you made me choke on my gum! Literally. You can tell people that this story is almost lethal now!

---and cries out, high and loud and fucking girly,

HAHAHAH! Jason! <3 Oh man, I'm shaking with glee this is so awesome. (And reminded that I haven't checked out your Jason tag yet and wishing there were more hours in the day)

Donna kisses him till his tongue feels like it could come like a dick

*snort* Oh I wish that was capitalized.

Jesus. Christ. And Gotham.

<3<3<3<3<3!!!!! Can Jason NOT SAY THIS EVERY TIME HE SWEARS?! Because OMG!

Now that's a sight to inspire a man to heroics.

Heh, I kind of got a Jayne vibe there. Good to keep up on your pervy priorities Jay-bird.

he was really glad when Dick stopped wanting to beat him half to death every time they saw each other.

AWWW! And they went on ski trips together! And took pictures!

Oh this was just. Just-- Jay! And Donna! And Kory!

Okay, wait. No- coherence. Just let me let my grin run out a little bit.

I really liked the fact that Jason was so unobservant of who Kory and Donna were compared to the juxtaposition of the last story where Joey was so observant. Because this is all about Jason and what he thinks about them, even though there's bits and pieces of them coming through, it's still really all about him getting laid with two hot chicks.
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