'The Sacrifice', Plus DVD Commentary Track

[Thank you for all the song recommendations, BTW. Hopefully I'll return to that post soon.]

So, I found this story in my files, and for some reason decided to repost it here. It makes me blush, but considering that I wrote it in 2000 or so, I suppose it should. It's fantasy-setting het erotica, a bit under 2500 words, with a DVD commentary immediately following. ( Clean and empty, I awaited the coming of the god. )

And now, the DVD commentary, as requested by rabidsamfan! ( The Sacrifice, DVD )

Calculations (Numb3rs/Torchwood Crossover, NC-17 threesome)

Title: Calculations
Fandom: Numb3rs/Torchwood
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Jack Harkness / Charlie Eppes / Susan Berry
Summary: Charlie's first consulting job.
Warnings/Spoilers: Het, slash, threesome, crossover.
All Thanks To: tigerbright for the title, lomedet for boundless encouragement, jelsemium for numb3rs_xovers, and dsudis for beta reading this, for which I am utterly grateful.
Author's Note: Susan Berry was Charlie's girlfriend during his time at Cambridge University; she appeared in Ep. 2.18, All's Fair.
Disclaimer: None of these characters or their settings belong to me.

( The prettiest girl he's ever met sleeps in his arms while the handsomest man he's ever had sex with hums in the shower. )

Signal Boosting: SF & F Fans of Color

As delux_vivens phrased it, "If you identify as a POC/nonwhite person and you read or watch scifi or fantasy, give yourself a name check in this thread... I'm tired of people trying to render us invisible unless they have been given a memo about our existences."

She's particularly seeking fans from outside the USA, but wants those of us in the US to state our presence as well.

Yes, I deliberately turned off comments on my post. If this applies to you and you like, go comment there. If it doesn't and/or you don't, then don't.