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browngirl ([personal profile] browngirl) wrote2007-02-15 09:15 am

Femslash Ficlet #15: DC Comics, Rated Hard R

This is so cheating, and ever so much fun to write, and is based on 'High As My Heart"


She's just as beautiful as when she was a man, and just as unconscious of it. Kory lies in Dick's bed, watching her shimmying into the Nightwing suit, looking rather like a short-haired, pugnacious and scarred version of Donna. Dick stomps, mutters and wiggles as she tries to fit a frame that's two inches shorter and curvier in the hips into the same tight armor.

Kory, for her part, is just watching, with occasional giggles. Dick bounces as if that'll make her new curves settle into the suit; what it does is make her hair flop and her breasts and bottom jiggle appetizingly, and Kory really wants to reach over. But Dick's determined, determined to do something today besides stay in bed with Kory, determined to patrol as Nightwing despite currently being female. Kory would like to think it's because she's treating the change as lightly as it really deserves, but in honesty she knows Dick better than that.

Even so. Dick curses, stripping off the tights and yanking off the top, and flings them across the room. She dives into the closet, rummaging with head down and rounded behind in the air, muscles moving sleekly as ever beneath soft skin, and Kory has to press her palms to the rumpled sheets to keep from reaching over and dragging Dick back into bed. "Where is it--- here. I haven't worn this one in awhile, but--" Dick pulls on an old top, the first design, with the high collar that framed a long biteable neck. "It's a little flashy for Bludhaven, but-- Kory! I thought--"

Dick is sputtering, because Kory's holding her in midair, nuzzling her plump breasts peeking over the v-neck of the top, tracing the valley of her strong back down to her sweetly rounded behind. But then, Dick has always had a sweetly rounded behind. "Kory, I should be-- oh, god--" Kory squeezes with both hands, settling Dick beneath her into the bed. The top strips off one-handed as quickly as it ever did; Kory licks a slick scar curved across Dick's breast, sucks hard on her crinkled nipple, and Dick's breath catches on the cry she insists on holding back. Dick gasps, "I really-- I should--" as Kory nips a trail of kiss-marks up over her collarbone, and when she presses teeth lightly into the sweetly salty arch of throat Dick groans in the same lovely arpeggio as always, half an octave higher.

[identity profile] petronelle.livejournal.com 2007-02-15 02:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Guh.

Very much Guh.

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2007-02-18 03:36 pm (UTC)(link)
*giggle* Thank you. :)

[identity profile] capra-maritimus.livejournal.com 2007-02-15 02:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee!!! :D:D:D:D

Very hot, and funny, and I enjoyed it even though I'm not in this fandom, and only know the characters a little.

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2007-02-18 03:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! i do love the DCU, where genderswappery is... not as far out there as all that. :)

switched to this journal JUST so I could use this icon

[identity profile] roboarrow.livejournal.com 2007-02-15 02:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Hurray for cheating!

She's just as beautiful as when she was a man, and just as unconscious of it.

I fell in love right at the first line. You could have just written that line and I'd be set (though I'm glad you didn't). Also, the Nightwing suit is so good for breasts I've noted, so good choice on dress up.

And what does she expect putting on THAT outfit in front of Kory, with BOOBS. He can't not get jumped. Pssht. I kind of want to see him in the green panties as a girl now (not that I don't when he's not a girl).

I love all the commonalities. Where it was the same as Dick before, but more feminine and the way Kory observes this just screams love. Like literally screams out at me, not me overusing that word.

It's a fic in four paragraphs and it's wonderful! Makes me want more Kory/Dick, like now in canon and in fic.

Re: switched to this journal JUST so I could use this icon

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2007-02-18 03:41 pm (UTC)(link)
*does dance of happy* Oh, I love that icon. And I love this comment. If I could I'd totally give it the long rply such a lovely comment deserves, but I'm unfortunately being paged. But I wanted to thank you, because this made me ever so happy.

*beams*
gloss: woman in front of birch tree looking to the right (recklesseffusivefullofjoy)

[personal profile] gloss 2007-02-15 03:33 pm (UTC)(link)
....gah! So very much GAH.

This was the perfect piece to read first thing this morning - it's hot and very sweet and I'm crushing on your Kory with her big, big heart more than ever.

She dives into the closet, rummaging with head down and rounded behind in the air, muscles moving sleekly as ever beneath soft skin, and Kory has to press her palms to the rumpled sheets to keep from reaching over and dragging Dick back into bed.
I'm glad she finally let herself go. :D

Dick makes, of course, a gorgeous and wonderful girl.

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2007-02-18 03:42 pm (UTC)(link)
*beams at you* Oooh, does he ever. Someone should write Bruce seeing Dick as a girl.

Oh, wait. *grin*
gloss: woman in front of birch tree looking to the right (recklesseffusivefullofjoy)

[personal profile] gloss 2007-02-18 03:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, wait.
I have no idea what you might be talking about. None.

*wiggles happily*

[identity profile] coldfiredragon.livejournal.com 2007-02-15 03:53 pm (UTC)(link)
*hugs a female Dick* Lovely, and make an amazing fem-couple.

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2007-02-18 03:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you, very much! *big smile*

[identity profile] caiusmajor.livejournal.com 2007-02-15 03:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow! Yeah, that first costume would be so *HOT* on a girl Dick. :)

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2007-02-18 03:44 pm (UTC)(link)
I was going to thank you for this comment, but I think I fell headfirst into your icon.

(Anonymous) 2007-02-15 04:38 pm (UTC)(link)
First of all - fantastic.
BUT I think that our characterizations of womanDick differ a little. Mine would be more like:
Dick: "Yay! I'm a woman!" *humpyhumpyhumpyhumpyhumpyhumpyhumpyhumpyhumpyhumpy*
The vibrations on the subway, passing amenable strangers, all his teammates, chair legs and armrests, shower nozzles; nothing would be safe. And when he realized that women tend to be encouraged toward sexy clothes and behavior than men are?

Bruce: (ten thousand miles away in a cave, without a communicator, deep in meditation) *eyes snap open* "My world has changed forever and I don't know why."

Clothing Manufacturer: "For some reason sales of daisy dukes and mini-skirts skyrocketed this year"

Kory would react, I think, just as you imagined. BUT. Yeah. Havoc would be spread throughout the world. Possibly the universe.

-mildredmilton

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2007-02-18 03:46 pm (UTC)(link)
*laugh* Thank you. :) I guess I didn't make it clear enough that this isn't Dick-just-after-being changed, but Dick long enough afterwards a couple dozen orgasms, maybe to have thought, "ok, I should go patrol now". Since he's still a superhero, after all.

Because, yeah, right after being changed was pretty much as you describe.

[identity profile] katarik.livejournal.com 2007-02-15 05:11 pm (UTC)(link)
*grabby hands* Dick, baby, you had to know that that outfit would result in you gettting picked up and molested.

Besides, you can't possibly go out fighting crime without decent support for your new, very lovely breasts! Better to stay in with Kory, yep. *nods seriously*

*ogles*

The description of Dick's groan makes me shiver. Mmmmmm, *them*.

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2007-02-18 03:48 pm (UTC)(link)
OK, that icon is *perfect* for this. :)

Dick, baby, you had to know that that outfit would result in you gettting picked up and molested.


He keeps being surprised. I don't know why, but he does. Silly boy.
vass: Robin and Nightwing (Birdboys)

[personal profile] vass 2007-02-15 05:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Mmmph. Guh.

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2007-02-18 03:48 pm (UTC)(link)
*grin* Thank you. :)
brownbetty: (Default)

[personal profile] brownbetty 2007-02-15 06:11 pm (UTC)(link)
aaahaahaaa! I love the V-neck that makes space for boobs.

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2007-02-18 03:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Cleavagewing! \o/

[identity profile] blueswan9.livejournal.com 2007-02-15 07:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Here via [livejournal.com profile] glossing.

What a happy fic. I really enjoyed this.

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2007-02-18 03:50 pm (UTC)(link)
And there's that long, biteable neck. :) Thank you, very much!
sage: Still of Natasha Romanova from Iron Man 2 (dick)

[personal profile] sage 2007-02-15 07:17 pm (UTC)(link)
oh, I love this. I love Dick like this and Kory just not caring one way or the other. ♥

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2007-02-18 03:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Kory knows what's important: Dick is pretty and tasty. :)

[identity profile] frimfram.livejournal.com 2007-02-15 08:30 pm (UTC)(link)
A world of guh! I've just read both - damn, that's hot. And I love the way you made them both just get on with it, with minimal out-wiggage ^_^

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2007-02-18 03:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you, very much! Yeah, I didn't want to write The Trauma of Genderswap. I wanted to write fun things. Thank you for telling me I accomplished that. :)

[identity profile] danachan.livejournal.com 2007-02-15 11:42 pm (UTC)(link)
looking rather like a short-haired, pugnacious and scarred version of Donna

... *snrk*

Also, this was hot and gah and very, very good.

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2007-02-18 04:00 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm really glad that description worked. They're so siblingy, I bet they really would look alike.

And man, if I put Dick and Kory into a story and it wasn't hot I would have to call myself a failure. *grin*

[identity profile] emeraldstag.livejournal.com 2007-02-16 09:12 am (UTC)(link)
Dick/Kory is always fun to read, bringing fem!Dick into the scenario certainly brought an interesting change of pace. Kory was awesome. Nice job!

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2007-02-18 04:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you, very much! I'd say more but I think the baby just hollered. But, at any rate, thank you for your recent spate of lovely comments!

[personal profile] papervolcano 2007-02-19 10:26 am (UTC)(link)
She's just as beautiful as when she was a man, and just as unconscious of it. ♥ That's such a perfect line and it sets the tone so well - of the story, of their relationship, and of the moment. I can feel the radiating glow of Kory's smile as she watches Dick shimmy and writhe into the Nightwing suit, as he refuses to let a little thing like a genderswitch stop him from patrolling his city. And oh, that Dick thinks he can put on the Vigilate Elvis/Cleavagewing suit without getting glomped by Kory! Oh, Dick!

But it's Kory that's really made this for me. I really don't think I would love Kory half as much as I do if it wasn't for your fic.

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2007-02-20 05:10 pm (UTC)(link)
But it's Kory that's really made this for me. I really don't think I would love Kory half as much as I do if it wasn't for your fic.

*beams*

You caught me in a talky mood, so....

One of the things I love about fanfic is how w can concentrate on side characters, flesh them out, make them protagonists. I love Kory a lot (as you'll see soon) and if I can convey that love to others, flesh out the potential I see in her, well, that really makes me all sorts of happy. :D
ext_55027: (dc:everyone loves... nightwing)

[identity profile] silveronthetree.livejournal.com 2011-07-07 10:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Female Dick in the old Nightwing suit is a lovely image and it is going to stick with me. Wonderful fic!

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2011-07-10 02:49 am (UTC)(link)
*bounces like my icon* Eee, thank you!