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Mini-DVD Meme Rides Again
I was going to stay up till midnight so this would be posted tomorrow, but I'm groggy. Anyway, this is going around, and I thought, why not?
Pick a passage from my stories, up to 500 words, from anything I've written in this journal, and comment to this post with that selection (including a link to the story being excerpted). I will then give you a DVD commentary on that snippet: what I was thinking when I wrote it, why I wrote it in the first place, what's going on in the character's heads, why I chose certain words, what this moment means in the context of the rest of the story, awful puns [perhaps], and anything else that you'd expect to find on a DVD commentary track.
Like Petra over at Dreamwidth I reserve the right to lie egregiously about anything over 3 years old. My stories are listed by character (and sometimes topic) here: http://rubynye.livejournal.com/tag/
Pick a passage from my stories, up to 500 words, from anything I've written in this journal, and comment to this post with that selection (including a link to the story being excerpted). I will then give you a DVD commentary on that snippet: what I was thinking when I wrote it, why I wrote it in the first place, what's going on in the character's heads, why I chose certain words, what this moment means in the context of the rest of the story, awful puns [perhaps], and anything else that you'd expect to find on a DVD commentary track.
Like Petra over at Dreamwidth I reserve the right to lie egregiously about anything over 3 years old. My stories are listed by character (and sometimes topic) here: http://rubynye.livejournal.com/tag/
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It earns him her laughing moan as she pushes into his touch; her breasts warmly overflow his hands as she leans over him, growling now, nipples pebbled against his palms as she shoves herself down harder on every stroke. It wins him a better view of Bones's face over her shoulder, eyes huge and intent under angled-down eyebrows, cheekbones flushing red and plump upper lip shiny wet. Bones licks his lip again, denting its ruddy tenderness with intent teeth, and Jim groans, "Fuck," because Moreau's squeezing slickly around him, because Bones's eyebrows are crashing together in slow motion, because he's going to lose this race to come last --
Cos this is one of the hottest things I've read, evar. ;)
BOW CHICKA BOW BOW
The woman who played Moreau was all kinds of hot, and when I saw the photo prompt I couldn't help but think of her with her heavy dark hair (I have a thing for hair like that -- through all the years I straightened my hair, I was aiming for hair like that.) and her creamy skin and all her hotness. Added to that, well, "Save The Last Dance" is one of my favorite stories I've written, so I enjoyed returning to the Bones Watches Jim Fuck theme.
And that's where this story came from. :)
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