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browngirl ([personal profile] browngirl) wrote2010-01-22 07:34 am

Redoubled (Star Trek XI Kink Meme Ficlet, NC-17 Threesome)

Title: Redoubled
Fandom: Star Trek XI
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Chekov/Sulux2
Summary: Someway, somehow, I want Chekov spit roasted by two Sulus. [livejournal.com profile] curiouslyfic had recently written such a tale (with Kirk instead of Chekov) set on the Holodeck, so I had to figure out another method.
Content Advisory: Explicit smut and nothing but.
Acknowledgements: [livejournal.com profile] lomedet, always, and [livejournal.com profile] ell_7 for posting Chekov/Sulu Kink Meme fills and prompts to [livejournal.com profile] chekov_sulu.
Disclaimer: None of these characters or their settings belong to me.


Pavel is blind and delirious, overfilled and overwhelmed, writhing between Hikaru and Hikaru and loving every breathless moment. Hikaru leans over him, sleek strong thighs parted around his head, crooning and moaning and stroking Pavel's chest as Pavel clutches the hard curves of his ass and swallows around his cock; Hikaru thrusts into him, gripping Pavel's thighs to hold him in place, gasping and cursing warmly as he keeps a steady hard pace that mercilessly nudges Pavel's prostate, burst after burst of sun-hot pleasure. Pavel drools and throbs and takes it, his twinned Hikaru doubly fucking him, his cock rising thrust by sticky thrust out of the come spattered all over his belly.

It's some Bolian technology, the bubble-shaped chamber they're in, duplicating a person within its bounds and recombining the twins when they leave, pulling the extra mass from its energy banks -- Pavel will investigate later, when Hikaru isn't twitching on his tongue, pressing hard fingers into his thighs, his ass throbbing as their hips collide, his jaw and lips burning happily. Later he'll be the curious Starfleet officer again, he'll examine the circuitry and read the equations and analyze how the device works. Later, after both his Hikarus are sated, aren't shaking and moaning and encouraging him with warm filthy words and fingers tweaking his nipples, aren't groaning through clenched teeth as their hips piston harder. Later, when his brain can again form words or numbers or thoughts, when it's no longer suffused with a glowing red haze, shot through with the lightning sparking up from his pounded prostate and crackling hole, streaming up his spine, prickling out across his skin. Later, after his cock isn't bobbing with each doubled thrust, aching-hard and twitching and untouched until Hikaru reaches forward and the searingly welcome stroke of tight fingers makes Pavel scream around Hikaru's cockhead nudging his palate.

"C'mon, baby, again, again," Hikaru murmurs, slipping in another hand from the other direction, interweaving his fingers around Pavel's cock. "Fuck, you're so hot, so perfect, c'mon, come on," doubled voice overlapping as Pavel shakes around his doubled cock. "Come on, Pavel, I'm gonna," merging into unison, "Pavel, please, please, come for me." Pavel sobs in ecstacy, Hikaru pressing the back of his throat, hilted deep within him, and pulses outward from his core in wave after wrenching wave of radiating pleasure. Hikaru tenses and shivers, fingers denting Pavel's skin as he moans and comes deep inside his clutching body, pulling back just far enough to slide his cockhead along Pavel's tongue as he gasps, "Oh, fuck, baby, yes," and spills over bitter-salty.

Still gasping, still shaking, Hikaru pulls out of him, stroking his juddering chest, his trembling thighs, his throat and ribs and cheeks as he gasps. Hikaru wraps him up in four arms, shifting close to either side of him, four knees pressing his front and back as Hikaru eases him down onto the blanket. Pavel swallows and coughs and clutches weakly at Hikaru's hard biceps, tipping his head back onto Hikaru's shoulder, limp and overcome with joy, smiling weakly as Hikaru kisses his cheeks and throat, mouth and temple. "Wow," Hikaru murmurs, and "God, that was amazing," trailing gentle fingers over the sore corner of Pavel's mouth and his slick-smeared belly, down his double's spine and through his hair. "Jesus fucking hexaploid Christ," and "which will I remember?"

"Both," Pavel croaks, and Hikaru laughs at his battered voice, kissing his eyelids and damp wilted curls. He knows, even without having done the math, but his eyelids weigh a megagram each, and Hikaru's warm and damp against his back, heartbeat pounding warm beneath his ear. Later, they'll discuss the physics, Pavel will explain the finer points of how his two Hikarus will become one again. Later, after Hikaru pulls his arm from its drape across Pavel's and his alter's waists, after all their six legs disentangle, after Pavel has returned from the other side of contentedly sated sleep.

[identity profile] withthepilot.livejournal.com 2010-01-22 01:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, GOOD morning to me. Sweet baby Moses. Two Hikarus make for a lovely wake-up call indeed!

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2010-01-28 02:04 am (UTC)(link)
*curtseys* Thank you. :)
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[identity profile] gingerberrycat.livejournal.com 2010-01-23 12:12 am (UTC)(link)
I KNOW!!!
I had to ask for them, and they came through.
I was soo excited, and thankful, and i was tempted to beg for Skant porn, but didnt wanna ask too much.
http://community.livejournal.com/trekicons/476061.html#comments

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2010-01-28 02:05 am (UTC)(link)
SKANT PORN. *contemplates thereon*

(Also, thank you. :D)

[identity profile] dana-norram.livejournal.com 2010-01-22 01:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Obviously a world with two Hikarus is a better place to live.

This fic made me wery happy.

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2010-01-28 02:06 am (UTC)(link)
*giggle* And I am wery, wery glad it did. :D
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[identity profile] boosette.livejournal.com 2010-01-22 01:43 pm (UTC)(link)
nnnngh

SUCH A HAPPY PLACE.

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2010-01-28 02:54 am (UTC)(link)
I wanted Pavel to have all the love his skin could hold!

[identity profile] fairhearing.livejournal.com 2010-01-22 02:07 pm (UTC)(link)
I, um, loved this. A lot.

Literary critic review: Don't think I didn't notice all your careful word choices here to make it read like one Hikaru that was, in fact, redoubled, like two mirrors reflecting each other, instead of two people who happened to have the name Hikaru. Subtle distinction but TOTALLY made the fic so much more awesome for me and also made it feel more sci-fi.

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2010-01-28 02:56 am (UTC)(link)
Literary critic review: Don't think I didn't notice all your careful word choices here to make it read like one Hikaru that was, in fact, redoubled, like two mirrors reflecting each other, instead of two people who happened to have the name Hikaru.

*squeezes you delightedly* You are the bestest, you know that? This is to [livejournal.com profile] curiouslyfic's credit; she was very clear throughout on the distinction between Hikaru and Sulu, which made me think about how to show two absolutely identical Hikarus.

I've been rereading this comment for days. Thank you. :D
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[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2010-01-28 02:58 am (UTC)(link)
*grins and curtseys* I try. :D

And yes, there will be math! *Later*.

[identity profile] hollycomb.livejournal.com 2010-01-22 04:14 pm (UTC)(link)
This is like the third time I've read this and it's still perfect. :D

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2010-01-28 02:59 am (UTC)(link)
*blushes with utter delight* Thank you. :)

(eeeee, Hollycomb likes my fic, eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee)

[identity profile] katmarajade.livejournal.com 2010-01-22 04:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, holy hotness! No wonder Pavel's worn out. Ugh-- TWO Sulus? There is nothing better than this. *dies*

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2010-01-28 03:06 am (UTC)(link)
Pavel has earned his rest indeed. :D Thank you, very much!

[identity profile] merisunshine36.livejournal.com 2010-01-22 05:22 pm (UTC)(link)
"hexaploid christ"

ahahahhaah yesssss. the hotness, it burns.

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2010-01-28 03:06 am (UTC)(link)
Well, he is a botanist. :D

*fans you gratefully*

[personal profile] starsandgraces 2010-01-22 05:35 pm (UTC)(link)
I just kind of don't even know what to say. Wow.

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2010-01-28 03:07 am (UTC)(link)
*giggles* That works!
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[personal profile] jadelennox 2010-01-22 05:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Ungh. Possibly this is a bulletproof kink for me.

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2010-01-28 03:08 am (UTC)(link)
WOOT. I am extra delighted that I hit it, then!

[identity profile] azephirin.livejournal.com 2010-01-22 06:12 pm (UTC)(link)
MMMMMMMMMMM. Hot and messy and delicious! :)

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2010-01-28 03:21 am (UTC)(link)
*curtseys* Thank you, m'lady. :D

[identity profile] emiime.livejournal.com 2010-01-22 07:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Lucky Pavel! Lucky Hikaru(s)! Lucky me for knowing you and getting to read your fic!

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2010-01-28 03:22 am (UTC)(link)
And lucky me that you write such lovely feedback! *huggles you*

[identity profile] sangueuk.livejournal.com 2010-01-22 07:27 pm (UTC)(link)
That was wonderful! Beautifully written! unf

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2010-01-28 03:23 am (UTC)(link)
*grins* Thank you muchly. :D

[identity profile] graceandfire.livejournal.com 2010-01-23 08:10 am (UTC)(link)
Later, when his brain can again form words or numbers or thoughts, when it's no longer suffused with a glowing red haze, shot through with the lightning sparking up from his pounded prostate and crackling hole, streaming up his spine, prickling out across his skin.

Ooh, the use of descriptive language in this. Hot and lyrical and perfect!

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2010-01-28 03:24 am (UTC)(link)
Eee, this means even more coming from someone as wonderfully skilled with language as you. :D

[identity profile] flwrpwr-vampyre.livejournal.com 2010-01-23 01:48 pm (UTC)(link)
*squeaks* Good god... How lucky is Checkov? There isn't a second of this that I didn't love and drool over.

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2010-01-28 03:25 am (UTC)(link)
*hands you a napkin*
*beamingly smiles at you*
Thank you. :D

[identity profile] jessofthebugs.livejournal.com 2010-01-23 07:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Ten points for use of the word "hexaploid."

Also, I'd love to be the jelly to Chekov's peanut butter, if you know what I mean, 'cause DAMN.
Double the fun.

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2010-01-28 03:27 am (UTC)(link)
I do so love -ploidies, even though I'm no kind of geneticist. I just love the concept, so I couldn't resist.

Also, just picture me nodding in agreement while blushing furiously. :D

[identity profile] jessofthebugs.livejournal.com 2010-01-28 02:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Ruby, darlin', though you are a perv, you are not a perv alone.
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[personal profile] libitina 2010-03-22 08:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Chekov is clearly very, very smart! I would wait to explore the mechanics, too! Because hot damn!

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2010-03-27 08:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, he *is* a genius. And also a horny teenage boy in love. I tried to explore all sides of Pavel here (hence, two Sulus. :D)