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browngirl ([personal profile] browngirl) wrote2009-03-24 08:34 am

Snow Visit (Numb3rs double-drabble, PG-13 with warnings)

Title: Snow Visit
Fandom: Numb3rs
Rating: PG-13 with warnings.
Pairing: Don/surprise/Charlie
Summary: "Get down here and lemme in, buddy."
Warnings/Spoilers: Set pre-series (during Charlie's MIT year), slash, incest, threesome
All Thanks To: / Acknowledgements: [livejournal.com profile] schnaucl for the idea.
Author's Notes: For my way-overdue Threesome Holiday Drabbles Project, and also [livejournal.com profile] numb3rs100 prompt #10, Travel, and [livejournal.com profile] drabble_a_trois prompt #7, Snow.
Disclaimer: None of these characters or their settings belong to me.



"Thought snow was supposed to be prettier," Don grumbled, voice crackling through the cellphone.

"I'm just glad your flight made it on time," Charlie jumped the railing to save six steps. "I can envision you terrorizing the airline staff."

"Ha ha." Don's growl made Charlie laugh breathlessly and run faster, heat rippling through his belly. "Get down here and lemme in, buddy."

"I'm at the door." Charlie dodged a couple of fellow students, plunged into the entranceway, threw open an outer door--

--and was bodily snatched up, toes scraping the floor, pinned to the inner wall, and kissed hard. "Mmph," was all Charlie managed as Don laughed in his ear, his fingers tight on quilted cloth, lips throbbing, fire flaring down his nerves.

When he was finally let up, way too soon, Charlie shivered as Billy grinned at him, blue eyes sparkling. "Surprise!"

"You're freezing." Charlie tried to glare at Billy's bright eyes, at Don laughing, and failed completely.

"Then let's go warm up with you, Genius." Billy set Charlie down, squeezing his bicep, Don pulled off his glove, draping his arm around Charlie's shoulders. Charlie tipped his head back smiling as they flanked him, solid and handsome and entirely his, already more than warm.

[identity profile] penguingal.livejournal.com 2009-03-24 12:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Nnngh... yes. That's the way I like to start my morning.

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2009-03-25 12:03 pm (UTC)(link)
*grin* I'm glad I could provide this bonbon with your morning coffee!

[identity profile] sockich.livejournal.com 2009-03-24 12:50 pm (UTC)(link)
And now I am all squishy inside. Boys! *loves*

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2009-03-25 12:52 pm (UTC)(link)
*squishes you joyfully*

[identity profile] riverotter1951.livejournal.com 2009-03-24 01:46 pm (UTC)(link)
An explosive start to the morning. Wonderful images.

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2009-03-25 12:53 pm (UTC)(link)
*beam* Thank you! And what an awesome icon!

[identity profile] paranoid-woman.livejournal.com 2009-03-24 02:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Whoa, that was sooooo nice! *mouth waters* *g*

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2009-03-25 12:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Billy Cooper, Fedcake of Tasty Hotness. :D

[identity profile] 1trackmind.livejournal.com 2009-03-24 04:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw, I love it!

solid and handsome and entirely his

And I love that phrase. The whole line was really good, but that's the part I really loved.

Very nicely done. Yay more Numb3rs from you! I do like Charlie with Don and Billy.

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2009-03-25 01:12 pm (UTC)(link)
*happy dances* I'm really glad you like this, especially that line. And oh, this fandom is stuck with me for the nonce! I love it here. :D

[identity profile] 1trackmind.livejournal.com 2009-03-25 06:25 pm (UTC)(link)
And oh, this fandom is stuck with me for the nonce! I love it here. :D

Excellent! *cues evil laughter*

[identity profile] melissima.livejournal.com 2009-03-24 06:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Ahhhh! How yummeh! :) You are entirely awesome.

When he was finally let up, way too soon, Charlie shivered as Billy grinned at him, blue eyes sparkling. "Surprise!"

"You're freezing." Charlie tried to glare at Billy's bright eyes, at Don laughing, and failed completely.



GUUUUUUUUH....I'm happy now....it's almost enough to make me miss snow. Delectable.

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2009-03-25 01:13 pm (UTC)(link)
*beams and hugs you* I'm really glad you got a chance to read this, because I know you're foremost among Billy's fangirls.

[identity profile] kiscico.livejournal.com 2009-03-24 06:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Charlie tipped his head back smiling as they flanked him, solid and handsome and entirely his

Great line! And Billy! Loved the surprise pairing. (Trio?)

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2009-03-25 01:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. :D I'm really glad you liked this.
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[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2009-03-25 01:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. :)

[identity profile] admiralandrea.livejournal.com 2009-03-24 09:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Cuuuuuuute!

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2009-03-25 01:15 pm (UTC)(link)
*curtseys* Thank you. :)

[identity profile] chymom.livejournal.com 2009-03-27 05:50 pm (UTC)(link)
I loved this. Will there be more?

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2009-03-28 02:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

And if I ever think of more bunnies for these three, there definetely will be. :)

[identity profile] emmademarais.livejournal.com 2009-04-02 08:47 am (UTC)(link)
Argh! I was sure I commented on this! LJ must have eaten it and I didn't notice because I had too many browser windows to juggle at the time. /growls/

I liked this very much for more reasons than I can articulate at almost 2AM, but I really enjoyed that misdirection my brain went on imagining *Don* manhandling Charlie instead of Billy. LOL But Billy doing it? Just as delicious, if not more so. All in all a wonderful read, but then I expect no less from you. ♥

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2009-04-02 12:10 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm almost not mad at LJ for eating the previous version of this comment, when it means I get this nifty one. :)

I almost wrote it the other way round -- Billy bringing Don as a surprise -- but then I decided that Surprise Incest might be a little unethical of me.

[identity profile] emmademarais.livejournal.com 2009-04-02 07:49 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL In a fandom where the phrase "surprise buttsecks" has been seen, I can attest to the fact I've not seen "surprise cest". ;-)

I think it works because you have them in a semi-public area (which was, IMHO, a very pleasant surprise). I can still enjoy the insinuation of cest just fine. The benefits of having an overactive imagination: the 'what comes next' part is rarely hard to conjure up given a scenario. Hehehe

P.S. That doesn't mean I don't want to you to write it! Please do! I need more good fic to read and it makes me happy when I'm not just stuck with my own.

[identity profile] irena-adler.livejournal.com 2010-04-08 03:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Great warming images :D Loved how Don is able to be so physical with Charlie at the distant MIT

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2010-04-11 01:04 am (UTC)(link)
They're all *definetely* taking advantage of being Away From Home. :)