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browngirl ([personal profile] browngirl) wrote2009-01-14 07:35 am

One Soft Spot (Numb3rs drabble, NC-17 with warnings)

Title: One Soft Spot
Fandom: Numb3rs
Rating: NC-17 with warnings.
Pairing: Don/Charlie (like you all didn't see this coming)
Warnings/Spoilers: Slash, incest, my usual wrongness.
Author's Note: Written for the N3100 Prompt of "Toast". #2 of 4 in the sequence.
Acknowledgements: [livejournal.com profile] lomedet. *beams*
Disclaimer: None of these characters or their settings belong to me.



Don gasps beneath Charlie's hand slickly rough around his dick, Charlie straddling his thighs, Charlie's teeth sweetly sharp on his throat. "Dammit, easy." His whole body hums like an overloading circuit, Charlie's teeth press in and it hurts so fucking good, but... "Don't, stop."

That, and Don tugging a handful of curls, makes Charlie finally pull his hot mouth off Don's neck, blinking open big indignant eyes. "What?"

"Marks," Don insists through the brainfog. "Don't mark me--"

"Or we're toast." Charlie grins wickedly. "I get that." No, he doesn't, but he strokes Don hard, kissing harder, and Don can only moan.

[identity profile] 1trackmind.livejournal.com 2009-01-14 06:13 pm (UTC)(link)
"Or we're toast." Charlie grins wickedly. "I got that." No, he hasn't, but he strokes Don hard, kissing harder, and Don can only moan.

Oh, very nice! I always love your Don/Charlie, I really do.

BTW, that's why my Charlie generally marks the inner thigh where no one should be looking anyway ;) He can't help it. I think even the more mature version of Charlie we've seen is always going to be a little insecure where Don and his affection are concerned. And that's before you get to the insecurity due to Don's inability to be faithful.

Then again, in your universe Charlie's not being faithful either so maybe he doesn't care about Don's fidelity or lack thereof. Is this lust or something more? What do you think?

As for the drabble itself, very sexy and hot. Though Charlie might think if Don's coherent enough to stop him he's still got some work to do. But maybe not.

[identity profile] emmademarais.livejournal.com 2009-01-14 07:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Pairing: Don/Charlie (like you all didn't see this coming)

Hehehe

This Charlie intrigues me. He lies blithely to Amita, he flaunts Don's concerns and seems oddly amoral about his infidelity and committing a felony.

To which I say good show! /applauds/

(Hey, complex Charlies are the best Charlies!)

Looking forward to the next two!

[identity profile] devon99.livejournal.com 2009-01-14 07:58 pm (UTC)(link)
My goodness!!

Very naughty boys.

Fab stuff.

[identity profile] sororcula.livejournal.com 2009-01-14 08:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, I love it, and I loooove your use of the prompt.

[identity profile] melissima.livejournal.com 2009-01-14 08:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Don gasps beneath Charlie's hand slickly rough around his dick, Charlie straddling his thighs, Charlie's teeth sweetly sharp on his throat. "Dammit, easy." His whole body hums like an overloading circuit, Charlie's teeth press in and it hurts so fucking good, but... "Don't, stop."

Nnnnghhhh.....I...uh...mmmm....

I'm too loopy from reading that to count how many of my kinks it hits. Suffice it to say I have a big, embarrassingly sloppy grin on my face and I'm on my 3rd reread in ten minutes.