ext_33636 ([identity profile] melissima.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] browngirl 2011-11-29 07:23 pm (UTC)

OmgYUM so much hotness. This is my favorite bit:

Charlotte tilts sly meaning into the words, tilts her head so her loose bun swings towards her shoulder and her earrings flash in the light. Those earrings are platinum alloy, her buttons are laced with gold, her zipper re-radiates the warmth of her skin; she sparkles with metal that Erik could use to pull her towards him.

Firstly, I love it because "tilts sly meaning into the words" is maybe my favorite use of 'tilts' ever. Secondly I love it because you paint such a delectable sensory picture of what it is to be Erik, and sense metal the way he does. Brava, my dear!

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