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browngirl ([personal profile] browngirl) wrote2011-05-20 10:11 am

Bounce (Star Trek XI commentfic, PG-13)

Title: Bounce
Fandom: Star Trek XI
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Cadet Kirk/Cadet McCoy
Summary: His roommate-cum-best friend-cum -- well. That's the thing.
Content Advisory: Slash, brooding, schmoop.
Acknowledgements: Another commentfic from [livejournal.com profile] jim_and_bones. Dedicated to [livejournal.com profile] mardia, to brighten her day.
Disclaimer: This fanwork has been created for pleasure only and not for profit.



Jim tosses his feet up on the back of the chair in front of his, arranges himself and his padd in a careful facsimile of studying, and settles down to brood. He didn't actually come to this deserted lecture hall to get classwork done, but to get away from his roommate-cum-best friend-cum -- well. That's the thing.

There's a terrible pun just waiting to be made, but Jim sighs instead and sinks a little further into his seat. Last time he saw Bones the man looked relatively cheerful, a smile wedged into the corner of his generous mouth as he yanked on his uniform, distracted by the class he was about to be late to. He looked good. Jim should feel proud.

He's a good rebound, after all, has been ever since his mid-teens. He's pretty and charming and he knows it, just right to catch people coming off a broken relationship and kiss some self-confidence back into them. Besides the obvious bonus of getting laid he just plain likes jollying them up with happy sex and sending them on their way feeling better about themselves.

This time, though, he doesn't want to send Bones on his way. Maybe it's because it took longer than usual to happen, all the way into their second year here. Maybe it's because of the scale of the relationship Bones is getting over, and as he thinks that Jim hears 'the whole damn planet' echo in his memory. Maybe it's because Jim didn't actually mean to seduce his best friend, because having Bones at his side and watching his back is something a lot rarer and more valuable than one more person to have sex with. Maybe --

The door at the top of the lecture hall swings open into a bang, and Jim turns and looks up to see Bones jogging down the steps as if he's run right out of Jim's thoughts. There's a splendidly cheesy line to be said, but Jim just smiles and calls, "Hey, Bones," swallowing hard as his heart lurches into overdrive.

"You forgot your socks," Bones says by way of greeting, tossing them at Jim, who snatches them out of the air. "Been looking for you for an hour, kid. I've got a question for you."

"Is that so?" Jim asks as lightly as he can, carefully watching himself pull on his socks instead of Bones lounging at the end of the row. "I was practicing Not Being Seen for future covert operations."

Bones snorts eloquently, and Jim smirks at his foot as he replaces his shoe. "I'm thinking of switching a shift next week so I can see the Zithartan Dance recital." Jim looks up and Bones is looking down, not quite nonchalantly. "Want to come with?"

"I'm always up for dancing girls," Jim answers, a little puzzled, "but... Bones." If it's possible, Jim's chest eases and tightens in the same heartbeat. "Did you come down here to ask me out?"

Bones huffs, still looking down. "Apparently I came down here to waste my time," he growls, turning away, and Jim vaults out of his chair, grabbing Bones's bicep as he scrambles to plant his feet on the floor.

"Yes," Jim says, sincerely, and watches Bones's eyes widen and shift, brighter green, brighter gold. "Yes, I'd love to." Bones's sharp eyebrows curve up and he actually smiles, and Jim just has to grin back, can't restrain a little bounce.
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[identity profile] boosette.livejournal.com 2011-05-20 02:29 pm (UTC)(link)
+ kudos
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+ download → ePub

+ Oh, boys

[identity profile] mardia.livejournal.com 2011-05-20 02:39 pm (UTC)(link)
EEE! THANK YOU. Oh, this is adorable, and Jim's delight about being asked out is so darling I cannot even. Thank you so much for this!

[identity profile] syredronning.livejournal.com 2011-05-20 03:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww, sweet :)

He likes it, jollying them up with happy sex and sending them on their way feeling better about themselves.

This sounds wonderfully and I wish I'd see Jim like that (actually I don't but you're close to selling it *G*)

This time, though, he doesn't want to send Bones on his way.

/romance /happy sigh

[identity profile] joirerson.livejournal.com 2011-05-20 03:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, happiness! I remember this from the jim and bones comm, and it is delightful to see it again!

[identity profile] circ-bamboo.livejournal.com 2011-05-20 03:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Ohhhhh, so cute! :-D
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[personal profile] gingicat 2011-05-20 04:45 pm (UTC)(link)
I LOVE this.

[identity profile] brighteyed-jill.livejournal.com 2011-05-20 05:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww, boys. This is sweet. And Jim's musings about his prowess as a rebound were both funny and sad. Well done as usual!

3 things

[identity profile] sororcula.livejournal.com 2011-05-20 07:42 pm (UTC)(link)
1. There's a terrible pun just waiting to be made Ahaha, I'm glad you acknowledged that because I laughed at "cum" as soon as I saw it. :-P

2. I have never read a Star Trek fic before! But something about this (see 1) pulled me in and then I loved it.

3. I will now proceed to quote a third of the fic back to you:

he just plain likes jollying them up with happy sex and sending them on their way feeling better about themselves.

CUTE.

"Been looking for you for an hour, kid.

UM. So. Basically this fic made me realize that I MAY HAVE a kink of sorts for people calling other people "kid." ♥

"I was practicing Not Being Seen for future covert operations."

Hahahaha.

"Apparently I came down here to waste my time," he growls, turning away,

OH NO. Heartbreaking! But only for a second, which I like.

and Jim just has to grin back, can't restrain a little bounce.

Yaaaaay. I loved this, Ruby! :-)

[identity profile] re-white.livejournal.com 2011-05-20 08:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Eeee!

I enjoyed this. *g* I love me some academy!fic.

[identity profile] sail-aweigh.livejournal.com 2011-05-20 08:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Eeeee! This is just as cute the second time around as when I saw it on the comm. I love the thought of Jim making that little bounce at the end; it made me bounce. :D

[identity profile] yeomanrand.livejournal.com 2011-05-20 10:02 pm (UTC)(link)
I missed this on the comm. I say to you: D'aw.

[identity profile] seanchaidh.livejournal.com 2011-05-20 10:50 pm (UTC)(link)
OH. That's so sweet. :)

[identity profile] secretsolitaire.livejournal.com 2011-05-20 10:54 pm (UTC)(link)
This made me smile again. ♥

[identity profile] sangueuk.livejournal.com 2011-05-21 12:09 am (UTC)(link)
My heart! I loved this line:Jim turns and looks up to see Bones jogging down the steps as if he's run right out of Jim's thoughts. You have such a way with writing these two, with your perfect little vignettes!
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[identity profile] caitri.livejournal.com 2011-05-21 02:02 am (UTC)(link)
*happy happy sigh* Hearts, bb! Hearts!!

[identity profile] mrasaki.livejournal.com 2011-05-21 04:24 am (UTC)(link)
Lovely, and so sweet. I always have a soft spot for vulnerable!Jim.

[identity profile] weepingnaiad.livejournal.com 2011-05-23 02:13 am (UTC)(link)
What a delightful treat, bb! I have no idea if I told you how much I adored this when I first read it on the comm, but it's gotten better on the re-read.

I love Jim's thought processes, how he was so surprised by Uhura's revelation, how it scared him, but he'd never let Bones down.

Wonderful, m'dear, as always!

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2011-05-23 03:22 am (UTC)(link)
*beams* Thank you, brighteyes. :D

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2011-05-23 03:23 am (UTC)(link)
You are totally welcome! I looked at this, and it said, "You wrote me because of Mardia's influence," so I had to. :D

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2011-05-23 03:24 am (UTC)(link)
*laugh* Maybe I should've made this longer to sell that better. But/and I am very glad you liked this. :D

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2011-05-23 03:25 am (UTC)(link)
Eee, thank you! (Icon of Happy Johnny!)

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2011-05-23 03:31 am (UTC)(link)
*curtseys* Thank you!

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2011-05-23 03:31 am (UTC)(link)
*beam* Thank you, roommie.

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2011-05-23 03:32 am (UTC)(link)
"Both funny and sad"! Yes! *fistpump* Eee, thank you!

Re: 3 things

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2011-05-23 03:33 am (UTC)(link)
*licks your icon* Um, where was I?

I had to acknowledge the pun, even though I didn't actually go there. And thank you for taking a chance on me, and quoting my story back to me. :D

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2011-05-23 03:34 am (UTC)(link)
Bright college Academy days. :D Thank you, bb!

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2011-05-23 03:35 am (UTC)(link)
Yay! I'm glad I could give you a bounce. :D

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2011-05-23 03:35 am (UTC)(link)
*curtseys* Thank you. :)

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2011-05-23 03:36 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! :D

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2011-05-23 03:36 am (UTC)(link)
I am always glad to make you smile. :D

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2011-05-23 03:40 am (UTC)(link)
*beams* Thank you, very much. They're just... endlessly inspiring. :)

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2011-05-23 03:41 am (UTC)(link)
*basks in your heart-y glow*

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2011-05-23 03:43 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah, for all his toughness he has a certain irresistible fragility, doesn't he?

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2011-05-23 03:44 am (UTC)(link)
*beam* If I managed to remind you of [livejournal.com profile] thistlerose's spectacular "On the Windy Side of Care" then I am well pleased with myself indeed.

*huggles you very gratefully*

[identity profile] weepingnaiad.livejournal.com 2011-05-23 03:49 am (UTC)(link)
And I am an idiot! *face->palm*

Never let loose on my phone when I've been driving all day!

You are the best, darlin'.

*squishes*

I still love it especially Bones being the one to ask.

Now I am going to crawl into bed and hopefully I will have a few more brain cells to rub together tomorrow.

[identity profile] savoytruffle.livejournal.com 2011-05-23 03:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw, that's so sweet. I like Jim as happy rebound guy, and I like him even more as not wanting to let Bones go on his way.

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2011-05-25 02:18 am (UTC)(link)
*beam* Thank you! This is a bonbon, so I'm really glad it was as sweet as was intended. :D
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[identity profile] duskwillow.livejournal.com 2011-12-10 09:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, my heart! This was wonderful!! ♥

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2011-12-11 01:36 am (UTC)(link)
*blushes* Thank you. :)

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[identity profile] hsavinien.livejournal.com 2012-01-25 05:27 am (UTC)(link)
Awww, sweet. *pats Jim*

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2012-01-30 03:38 am (UTC)(link)
I may have written ghim a bit too sweetly, but I did enjoy it.