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Title: Sideways Wriggle North-Northwest
Fandom: Star Trek XI
Rating: NC-17 with tentacles.
Pairing: Kirk/McCoy/OTC
Summary: SWNNW is currently enjoying an interface with two sleek responsive humanoids while trying to ignore faint twinges of conscience.
Content Advisory: Slash, threesome, authorial attempts at actual science fiction, tentacles.
Acknowledgments: [livejournal.com profile] boosette, [livejournal.com profile] lindmere and [livejournal.com profile] thnidu.
Disclaimer: This fanwork has been created for pleasure only and not for profit.
Author's Note: Posted for my birthday commentficathon and at [livejournal.com profile] tentacle_fest, and cleaned up since.



Sideways Wriggle North-Northwest, of the Sea-Land People of Wasat II and henceforth denoted as SWNNW, is currently enjoying an interface with two sleek responsive humanoids while trying to ignore faint twinges of conscience. They're symmetrically handsome in their bizarreness, especially now that they've given up that disorienting verticality to lie grounded within SWNNW's embrace, linking themselves enthusiastically at the nexus of their lower limbs, and SWNNW winds around their limbs and trunks, eagerly pressing counterpoint to the firm strength of their muscles. Their skins are taut and warm under SWNNW's touch, both tinted translucent red by iron-bearing blood, but their fuzzy cephalic pelt-patches are conveniently different colors and textures; the one beneath, settled dorsally against the ground, has densely packed straight dark strands that slide smoothly around SWNNW's tentacletips, while the other, pressed ventrally atop with lower limbs wound tightly around the one below as if in imitation of tentacles, has shorter, stiffer, brighter strands and a thrilling habit of flashing shining teeth whenever SWNNW ruffles the pleasingly ticklish pelt.

They're terribly fascinating, these two in specific and their people in general, and SWNNW cannot fathom why the Conduct-Instructor disapproves of taking an interest in how they writhe and vocalize when stimulated. It's clearly complex behavior -- everyone accepts the fact of their sentience by now -- so shouldn't this count as proper research, SWNNW wonders at the distributed edge of a ganglion or two, while devoting most of the rest to causing and cataloguing the responsive movements of these bilateral acquaintances. The bright one above has been rocking with enthusiastic yet sinuous grace, impaled upon the one below; SWNNW slides in a tentacle alongside, thinning it to slip inside the pressing ring of hot muscle and then swelling it within to better feel the dynamic slide of their bodies together and the resilient squeeze of densely innervated flesh. They respond simultaneously with louder, deeper noises, the one above arching as if built on cartilage rather than bone for all that SWNNW can feel each vertebral bump and articulation beneath damp heating skin. The one below vocalizes ceaselessly, voice profanely sharp and joyfully sweet as the savor of their happy skins, and the one above puffs air through a single mouth so shiny-red-soft SWNNW cannot resist reaching up to stroke exploringly.

The bright one responds by engulfing the tentacle's tip in wet flexing heat, pulling a delightful rippling suction that makes SWNNW shiver down to every tentacle's end. The dark one makes a breath-stopping noise as SWNNW pushes tentatively in a posterior direction, seeking to find if they're both so warm inside; with a reverberating cry SWNNW is granted access to a deliciously encompassing press of of heat, and so responds with hopefully stimulating twisting motions within them both, mindful of the limits of even resilient flesh, twining around the shaft linking their bodies.

The effort seems a success, as they both respond with sharp loud noises and the dark one's whole form arches up, as their fine motor grippers tighten around each other's forelimbs and SWNNW's tentacles alike. SWNNW curls a tentacle around the bright one's shaft, tucked between them, and feels the pulsing full-form shudders and characteristic sticky overflow of humanoid ecstasies.

The one below is louder than ever, thrusting into the layered press of twining tentacle and accepting body almost too fast for SWNNW to keep up; as the one below grows more forceful the one above goes lax, exhaling little noises of mixed pleasure and discomfort, and SWNNW's neural networks tingle in sympathetic excitement as the dark one throbs through a wrenching climax and at last slumps into relative stillness but for decelerating deep breaths and indistinct sated rumbles.

The bright one coughs a glottal pulse around SWNNW's tentacle; mindful of humanoids' need for unimpeded respiration, SWNNW slides the tentacle away to curl around both their damp, radiant forms as they press their mouths together, bright and dark cephalic patches contrasting pleasingly as the tide of their respiration decelerates and the warm savor of their contentment grows stronger. Humanoids pack so many communicative organs into one small cephalic structure, SWNNW reflects, brushing tentacles lightly across their covered eyes and radiant ear-shells, twining gently closer around their bodies to soak in their galvanic heat. The Conduct-Instructor of SWNNW's creche disapproves of these dalliances, stating SWNNW should apply these talents of biology and observation towards learning a profession and thus earning a name rather than this so-labeled 'sordid' hobby of stimulating humanoids to incoherence, but SWNNW can't help but think, every ganglion in complete accord, that if this is wrong there's no point to being right.



So, the prompts I wrote this for were "Father used to tell me: trust the wisdom in my hearts/But sometimes they're outvoted by my more prehensile parts." and [Resolution for] Jim: To experience double penetration, by Bones + some other man, woman, or other sentient being. Because I'm weirdly completist like that.
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Date: 2011-02-01 05:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] arcane_lark.livejournal.com
...only you. Only you can make clinical observation by a tentacle alien super hot.

Now I have to go to my anthropology class, where I will be reading clinical observations about things. Thanks a lot.

Date: 2011-02-03 03:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*cackles in delight and only a little wickedness* You are very, very welcome. :)

Date: 2011-02-01 06:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] illariy.livejournal.com
... I didn't get past the first sentence yet. It blew my brain with its hotness. Guuuuuuuh...

(If I recover and manage to read further, I'll comment more. That was one killer of a first sentence! :D)

Date: 2011-02-03 05:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*laugh* Thank you. I try to make my first lines ... immersive. :D

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Date: 2011-02-01 06:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] petronelle.livejournal.com
My heart is full of joy and tentacular goodness. <3

Date: 2011-02-03 06:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Hooray! I feel accomplished now. :)

Date: 2011-02-01 06:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eppic.livejournal.com
This is so brilliant oh my god. BEST TENTACLE FIC EVER.

Date: 2011-02-03 06:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*curtseys* Thank you. :)

Date: 2011-02-01 06:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caiusmajor.livejournal.com
Tentacle porn! From the perspective of the tentacle creature! This is so very, very awesome. :D

Date: 2011-02-03 06:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
I couldn't help wondering what their perspectives might be, and then, you know, this. :)

Date: 2011-02-01 06:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] imachar.livejournal.com
Oh my...wow...that was really hot...and gorgeously written, the density and richness of detail just made it wonderful...lucky, lucky alien anthropologist :)

Date: 2011-02-03 06:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
SWNNW really cherishes this hobby. *grin* Thank you, very much!

Date: 2011-02-01 07:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] echoinautumn.livejournal.com
Unf, yes. I don't think I have a particularly coherent response, but this is a fun, sci-fi-y piece that is a great break from the demands of the rest of my day.

Date: 2011-02-03 06:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
This is a wonderfully coherent response! And one that fills me with delight. :)
Edited Date: 2011-02-03 06:23 pm (UTC)

Date: 2011-02-01 07:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_samalander/
Gorgeous. I love the way you handled the alien perspective.

Date: 2011-02-03 06:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Thanks. :) I just... tried to think about how someone really different might see us.

Date: 2011-02-01 07:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sail-aweigh.livejournal.com
That was just splendid! SWNNW has obviously got great taste in extra-curricular partners, despite what the Conduct-Instructor thinks of the 'hobby'. That's a hobby I'd sure like to take up!

Date: 2011-02-03 06:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*cackles* SWNNW isn't the first kid whose parent disapproves of their taste in SOs. Some things are likely universal. :D

Date: 2011-02-01 07:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] savvierthanu.livejournal.com
This is made of wonderfulness and squee! And also brilliance and also more squee!

Date: 2011-02-03 06:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*bounces and squees with you*

Date: 2011-02-01 07:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] exiled-mind.livejournal.com
This is... umm, wow. So apparently I dig tentacle fic now? Go figure :) Excellent, hot, and fun - thank you!

Date: 2011-02-03 06:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*curtseys* You are very welcome, and thank you! Tentacles can be very interesting. :)

Date: 2011-02-01 07:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] odsbodkins.livejournal.com
Interesting porn FTW!

Date: 2011-02-03 06:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Bwee, thank you! :D
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Date: 2011-02-03 06:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
I love that icon SO MUCH.

And I adore this comment, and its writer. *beams* Eee, thank you. :)

Date: 2011-02-01 08:30 pm (UTC)
jadelennox: A fish-shaped candle holder in the snow (fish)
From: [personal profile] jadelennox
You are the best person in the WORLD. Seriously, sheer, unadulterated genius.

Date: 2011-02-03 06:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*blushes and blushes* Eee, thank you. :)

Date: 2011-02-01 08:36 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] spockside
Believe me when I say that your ability to get inside the head of an inquisitive tentacle being is unparalleled. Almost as if you WERE an inquisitive...hmm...

Date: 2011-02-03 06:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
AHAHA. Disappointingly, I am a short round human woman. I just think more than is good for me. :)

Date: 2011-02-01 09:12 pm (UTC)
ext_12246: (yay)
From: [identity profile] thnidu.livejournal.com
Hee, hee. And I realize now that the earlier version of this story was the source of the penultimate line of the last stanza of my filk "Bound on Argo" -- "We'll try out almost anything with humanoid or BEM" -- which you just did me the honor of praising as (hee hee!) "funny & kinky".
Edited Date: 2011-02-01 09:12 pm (UTC)

Date: 2011-02-03 06:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Okay, that's awesomely recursive. :) And, thank you again for correcting a really important mistake in the first draft.

Date: 2011-02-01 09:38 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] starsandgraces
I love love love how this manages to be both blisteringly hot and incredibly clever all at once. Clearly tentacle monsters are your forte and frankly, I am completely okay with that. ;)

Date: 2011-02-03 06:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
I can deal with being a Tentacle Specialist. :D Thank you, a lot!

Date: 2011-02-01 09:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] weepingnaiad.livejournal.com
You, bb, are brilliant and amazing and awe-inspiring and that was so hot and sweet and made me smile on this blustering blizzardy day (and yes, that's a word).

*hugs*
WN

Date: 2011-02-03 06:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Hooray! That's exactly what I wanted to do with this. :)

*hugs you across the Internet*

Date: 2011-02-01 09:51 pm (UTC)
sage: Still of Natasha Romanova from Iron Man 2 (sageness: flipflops)
From: [personal profile] sage
Hee! This is awesome.


In my head...

Bones: Actual non-humanoid xenophilia? Seriously? Are we seriously doing this?
Jim: *sigh* Don't be difficult. Here, take my mouth while it opens me.
Bones: *grumbles* Like I can say no to that...mmm.

{later}
Bones: You know, it really is amazing what a person can get used to.
Jim: *beams* We are so coming back here.

Date: 2011-02-03 06:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
YES YES YES YES. And also YES.This is exactly what happened!

I love how you just remixed my story. :D
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Date: 2011-02-03 06:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*giggles* Thank you, very much. :)

Date: 2011-02-02 12:12 am (UTC)
avictoriangirl: (ovaries exploded)
From: [personal profile] avictoriangirl
I don't know how it's possible for something so clinical sounding to be so hot, but you did it! UNF.

Date: 2011-02-03 06:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*beams* Thank you. I figured... precision would define SWNNW, in observation and in passion. And then I got a little drunk and went with it. *laugh*

Date: 2011-02-02 12:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sangueuk.livejournal.com
Alien POV for the win - I say it again, you are a genius! I've never read anything so unusual yet sweet :D Bloody brilliant! *applauds*

Date: 2011-02-03 06:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*blushes* Thank you, lots and lots! I'm really glad to be told this unusual dish of mine finds favor.

Date: 2011-02-02 01:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] treksnoopy.livejournal.com
I started giggling and couldn't stop! This is just effin brilliant!

Date: 2011-02-03 06:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*beams and bounces* Thank you, very much. :D

Date: 2011-02-02 02:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azephirin.livejournal.com
OMG! Tentacles aren't usually my thing, but I love SWNNW and hir delightful combination of curiosity, lust, and clinical analysis. What a great outsider POV, and did I mention hot?

Date: 2011-02-03 06:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Thank you for taking a chance on SWNNW, and on me. I'm especially glad you liked this. :)

Date: 2011-02-02 02:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the-archandroid.livejournal.com
this is like, award winning tentacle fic! i can't believe how specific and scientific and hot this is, and how basically kirk and mccoy are being pleasured by the kirk version of this tentacle alien. too great!

Date: 2011-02-03 07:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
*pins this to my heart* This comment is my award. :) And yes, SWNNW and Jim are truly kindred spirits. :D
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