YAY for girl!Kirk!!!!! I love all your genderswap stories and I am very happy to see you tackle Jen (or Jamie, or whatever) Kirk. She did cry a bunch, but it felt appropriate for the situation. I hope you will write more of her. I would LOVE to see what you do with Jen Kirk in the mirrorverse!

Also, this is one of the best interpretations of Gary I have ever read. He is hard and wild and I understand why he appeals to the destructive part of Jen's nature. However, I liked that he wasn't a caricature of evil. At the end of this I felt genuinely sad that he was dead.

Great story!