ext_55027: (kirk: love at first sight)
ext_55027 ([identity profile] silveronthetree.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] browngirl 2011-01-24 03:57 pm (UTC)

This is lovely. Poor Jim - he doesn't have the luxury of simply waking up and snuggling. I love your descriptions of Leah especially this -

her dark hair a soft heavy tumble across the pillow, her face smooth without its waking scowl and her visible eye huge under its curved eyelid. She's got a sweet rack and a little cushion to her, she radiates warmth...


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