ext_18423 ([identity profile] simmysim.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] browngirl 2009-11-11 02:39 am (UTC)

Okay I love this for all the obvious reasons, there is Pike, and he's fucking Chekov over a desk, and it is very hot, etc, but also I REALLY LOVE the details you put into this stuff. It feels so real, each one of your fics, the coordinates, the calculations, and even the dialogue, it all feels so, so canon. And not only that, just. Very true to life. I adore it.

And I love the descriptions of Pike's huge hands, it's such a subtly brilliant way to describe how powerful he is/how much control he has here. And it's hot.

Also I'm usually really picky about what I enjoy in a USS version of Chekov, and I really really like yours, his viciousness and ambition. It really feels like a darker reflection.

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