ext_1889 ([identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] browngirl 2009-09-08 02:23 am (UTC)

I am trying so hard not to wake the baby, omg

The first sentence: Jim is brilliant, and soaking wet.
The last sentence: "Winslow? Still a virgin."
The thing that made me want to write it: Like Jim, the idea came to me in the shower.
The biggest problem I had while writing it/Why it almost never got posted: I had trouble thinking of how to convey the montage scenes. Not to mention the inevietable monogamy issues.
The scene that hit the cutting room floor: I almost let Jim get Ensign Winslow, but the story really wouldn't've been nearly as funny if I had.
Something else that I want readers to know: How did you know my estimate for the Enterprise's crew complement is 400-450?

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