The first sentence: Gaila enters Starfleet Academy because of Captain Pike. The last sentence: She looked over her shoulder with a blinding smile. "Are you coming?" The thing that made me want to write it:Pike's documented thing for Orion girls You said it so well above! You saw everything I was trying to do. I would just be restating if I tried to describe. The biggest problem I had while writing it/Why it almost never got posted: Doing Number One justice. The scene that hit the cutting room floor: The threesome with Kirk. My id wanted it, my superego said no. Something else that I want readers to know: I'm actually working on a Pike/Gaila story right now; thank you for this, as it helps.
Holy crap, I want to read this.
The last sentence: She looked over her shoulder with a blinding smile. "Are you coming?"
The thing that made me want to write it:
Pike's documented thing for Orion girlsYou said it so well above! You saw everything I was trying to do. I would just be restating if I tried to describe.The biggest problem I had while writing it/Why it almost never got posted: Doing Number One justice.
The scene that hit the cutting room floor: The threesome with Kirk. My id wanted it, my superego said no.
Something else that I want readers to know: I'm actually working on a Pike/Gaila story right now; thank you for this, as it helps.