ext_4070 ([identity profile] emmademarais.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] browngirl 2008-10-24 08:12 pm (UTC)

Okay, I put this one off because, well, I put off all the ficathon fic because I was lost in Wilderness Bound. I figured I'd save this for when I had time for a nice long fic read.

You reminded me in one fic why I love Don/Charlie. I think this year the D/C I've read hasn't really moved me like it used to, but this *worked*. I felt that way again about them and I'd missed that. So thank you.

I really liked the complexity of Charlie's two relationships and that he seems to feel it's totally okay to have both of them fully. That's an unusual take on him, since most people write Amita as more of a prop or disposable in favor of Don, but this Charlie is pursuing his relationship with her as if Don didn't exist and that's oddly fascinating. Interesting choice.

I'm not sure why them on the bed was so good, but I just chalk it up to your talent as a writer. Anyone can write Don and Charlie foreplay and sex, but I feel it when you do, that's for sure.

So ineloquent, this comment is, having just woken up from a bad night of not-sleep, however I do want to express that this was more than a worthy read - I'm genuinely glad you wrote it. Thank you.

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