I'm sorry this took so long, but I wanted to let you know I really enjoyed this piece. I love the image of Charlie being so comfortable in Don's apartment, and I enjoyed Don having a quiet moment to think about Charlie and decide what he wanted to do.
I thought you did a great job with Don's mixed emotions about his relationshp with Charlie and Charlie's relationship with Amita. Don wants to do the right thing I'm just not sure he knows what that is.
Does Charlie realize how manipulative he's being? I think he genuinely loves Amita and he genuinely loves Don. Does he get that he can't really have both, not forever?
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I thought you did a great job with Don's mixed emotions about his relationshp with Charlie and Charlie's relationship with Amita. Don wants to do the right thing I'm just not sure he knows what that is.
Does Charlie realize how manipulative he's being? I think he genuinely loves Amita and he genuinely loves Don. Does he get that he can't really have both, not forever?