A smidge of femslashy commentfic (DC Comics, PG-15 or so)

[browngirl]

So, glossing asked a very important question, and in the general party that happened in the comments people started writing commentfic with pairings like Kon/Tim and Hal/Ollie and Bruce/Clark in every permutation possible.

And there's also this little bit of two valiant princesses, um, interacting.

(Originally titled "And then they had sex".)

Momentum carries Kory to her feet; victory pulls her into the air. The last Amazon tumbles backwards and thuds to the packed earth, and Kory swings her staff over her head, fills her lungs deeply, and shouts. Her arms shake, her armor's in tatters, her right knee wants to buckle, and she fought ten Amazons to a standstill. She won, and the thought is light and fire in her veins as she leaps a little higher before gravity pulls her down.

"Well done, Princess Koriand'r!" carries above the cheers and shouts, as Kory lands and staggers and clutches her staff before her. She turns towards the warm alto voice and smiles at Princess Diana, who stands framed by the Amazons, who've parted to let her through. "I've very rarely seen such valor against such odds. If anything, Wonder Girl has understated your prowess."

"Thank you, Princess Diana." Kory sets her teeth against her throbbing knee and bows; Diana bows too, deeply, then removes her cloak. "Do you have strength for one more challenger?"

The Amazons roar like a stormy sea; Diana's smile gleams bright and tilted. Kory straightens her back, and does not lean on her weapon. "Of course," she says. "I'm ready."

"Wait one moment." Diana reaches behind herself, and her armor slides forward and settles around her ankles; a nearby Amazon scoops it up. Now she wears only headdress and boots, and it's a magnificent look on her, curved and sleek and sheened with oil and strength. "I thought I should dress to match my opponent," she says, and Kory has to grin.

Then Diana shouts a clear wordless challenge, leaping at Kory, and Kory screams joyfully back as she swings up her staff.

Comments

[penknife.livejournal.com]

Ooh. I love this.

[rubynye.livejournal.com]

*beam* Thank you. It's always a great day when I see that gorgeous icon.

[gloss]

I love this EVEN more in the bright light of day.

You really are a wonder, and I wish I could make you believe that as wholeheartedly as I feel it.

[rubynye.livejournal.com]

Well . I oiled Diana up a bit in the interim :D

*hugs you warmly, hiding my face* Thank you.

[kshandra]

Made. Of. Awesome.

[rubynye.livejournal.com]

BWEE, thank you!

And I *love* your icon.

[blackrosebard.livejournal.com]

*gleeful squeeing*

Pretty pictures in my head...

[rubynye.livejournal.com]

Mmmm, animated Black Canary.

Thank you for this comment, and that icon!

[axiom_of_stripe]

Momentum carries Kory to her feet; victory pulls her into the air. The last Amazon tumbles backwards and thuds to the packed earth, and Kory swings her staff over her head, fills her lungs deeply, and shouts.

go kory! go kory! *punches the air*

Now she wears only headdress and boots, and it's a magnificent look on her, curved and sleek and sheened with oil and strength.

and oh, what a reward she gets! :)

yay!

[rubynye.livejournal.com]

I love Kory, I really do. That unabashed combination of warrior and sensual sweet girl. you know? So when I thought of how to pair her up with Diana I immediately saw her in combat on Themiscyra.

I'm really glad you like this. :D

[caiusmajor.livejournal.com]

AWESOME! Beautiful, beautiful image.

[rubynye.livejournal.com]

What a gorgeous icon! That's totally the Diana I was picturing.

[hradzka.livejournal.com]

Yay for glorious friendly battle! This is delightful.

[rubynye.livejournal.com]

The nudity didn't hurt either, did it? *grin* Thank you.

[oszras.livejournal.com]

I found my way over here by way of comicstore_news.

Dear God Almighty I love this like a well loved thing! It's so, so right . I don't know much about Kory (I've only heard of her through scans_daily) but Diana? She is all that is good and wonderful for me. :D You get her "voice" perfect in this and I can just see her just like this. Man, you made my day.

This is just so...good. This is also why I don't post my own Diana fiction - I cannot equal this kind of good. :)

[rubynye.livejournal.com]

Hi! And thank you, very much! I don't write Diana that often, so I'm really glad I did well by her in your eyes. And you should *definetely* post your Diana fic, she should be written about lots and lots.

[emeraldstag.livejournal.com]

This is a very fitting scene for these two ladies. I'm surprised there isn't more fic out there featuring them, they seem to just click. ♥ Kory.

[rubynye.livejournal.com]

Kory is such an Amazon, you know? In heart if not in origin. So when Gloss mentioned them together I knew it would work if I could do them justice. I'm really glad you liked this. :D

[ilyena_sylph]

I... um. I, G'uh!, Just...

In case you can't tell, you broke me a LOT. These are such utterly gorgeous images.

I love Kory winning, I love Diana praising her, and holy moly great Hera and Aphrodite I WANT art of the two of them like that!

'agpirwygiphlshg!

[rubynye.livejournal.com]

*grins and fans you* I do rather wish I could draw this. But I try my best with words, and I'm really glad you like it. :D