Drawing: I need advice

[browngirl]

Honor system! DO NOT LOOK AT THIS IF YOU HAVE CHILDREN

Below are excerpts from the two versions of my WIP Mother's Day card, and a poll.

#1:

#2:

[Poll #2042017]

I realized that the way I cropped it, it isn't obvious that the larger lady is a hobbit, if that info matters.

(Also, I need an idea for the Father's Day card.)

Comments

[catlinye-maker.livejournal.com]

On the second one the larger fairy appears concerned, rather than joyful, because of the loss of detail in their faces. So I prefer drawing #1.

[browngirl.livejournal.com]

*makes a note* Thank you for telling me. :)